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This story stars M'gann (Miss Martian) and Conner (Superboy) and takes place somewhere in the second half of the first season of Young Justice.

M'gann is 48 years old chronologically but as a Martian she's biologically 16. Conner is a half Kryptonian clone made from the DNA of Superman and Lex Luthor who is less than a year old but physiologically he's 16 too.

This is my first attempt at writing the kind of story that would be posted on his board, so please tell me how I did (be critical if you have to) and say if you'd like me to write any more Young Justice bits or maybe continue this one. Others will likely be a lot more sex focused than this one but I'm getting warmed up.


When M'gann let herself into Conner's room she wasn't wearing her blue caped hero costume or the pink skirt with the short-sleeved crop top sweater that she looked so adorable in. Instead she was barefoot and dressed in a purple satin robe tied loosely at the waist. The alluring nightwear was reserved for Conner's eyes only which wasn't a problem since at this late hour they were the only ones left in the cave, the team's secret headquarters.

"I was just watching a few more of those adult DVDs I 'borrowed' from Wally, I thought you might like to help me try out a few more of the things I saw in them" she suggested with a flirtatious grin before tugging on her belt. The robe fell past her shoulders and puddled at her feet to reveal that she was wearing nothing underneath it.

Leaving aside her unique green skin tone she was a perfect example of the young feminine form, her flawless skin flowed over gentle curves and soft nubile breasts. And framed by a mane of red hair was the cutest face in the solar system, a face whose innocence was perhaps a bit at odds right now with the lewd pose she was making to invite her boyfriend into trying some kinky sex.

But despite the offer that would've had most teenage boys already on top of her Conner wasn't moved. His expression was tense and his focus obviously wasn't on the pretty girl standing naked in his room. "Not tonight, I've got other things on my mind" he grunted.

Worry replaced lust and she reached forward intending to touch his cheek reassuringly. "I can probably guess what it is" she said softly.

Seeing what she was trying to do Conner abruptly turned away and crossed his arms over his chest. "I don't want to talk about it!" he yelled and then seemed intent on staring at the floor, his body stiff and rigid with the energy he was keeping bottled up.

Seeing how it was going to be M'gann held in a sigh and instead smoothly shifted her form, her body quickly morphing into that of a bald man in an expensive tailored suit. "Perhaps you'd like to talk to me. After all, a father always has time for his son" said the polished voice of Lex Luthor putting a galling emphasis on the word son.

"I AM NOT YOUR SON" exploded Conner as he whipped around swinging with a punch that sent Luthor staggering back and clutching his now loosely hanging arm.

Squeezing his jaw tightly the still calmly collected villain managed to grin despite how much his shoulder must be hurting. "Tsk-tsk, a sadly predictable response. But they do say that the truth hurts" he joked in a manner that made it sound like he was still the most powerful man in the room.

This time Conner didn't use any words when he shouted his rage, roaring forward and slamming the older man against one of the cave walls formed from stone and concrete. Slamming his fists into Luthor's chest he ignored the man's pained grunts and instead delivered a series of shocking blows before grabbing Luthor by the neck and throwing him face first into the ground.

Already Luthor seemed to be in no condition to trade more barbs and was struggling to get up with only one weakened arm. But rather than let him have that chance Conner kicked him in the side with Kryptonian strength, sending the man flying clear across the room with enough force to shatter the bookcase he collided with.

Not pausing Conner marched over and with one hand lifted the source of his ire out of the pile of splinted wood and with the other smashed his fist right into Luthor's face just as he was looking up. "I. AM. NOTHING. LIKE. YOU." Conner swore as he emphasized each word with a solid hit.

With his ears still ringing with rage he hurled Luthor to the floor again and brought his boot down with a heavy crunch followed by several more before he dropped to his knees and frantically used his fists to finish the job. Finally his well of anger went dry and he knelt there panting before standing up and letting his heart rate return to normal.

Looking down he watched while in stops and starts Luthor's form began to shift, slowly and awkwardly returning to the shape of a small teenaged girl. Lying naked and exposed her injuries were far more apparent now that he could see her green skin which was almost entirely covered in dark bruises accented by blood. A tiny wail accompanied the little twitches her mangled limbs were making and it was obvious that she was in sheer agony but could do nothing about it. The damage he'd done to M'gann's body in only a few minutes was almost unbelievable.

Her one eye seemed to dimly make contact with his but there were no words to follow, only a small gurgled from the place where her lower jaw had been snapped apart in two places and most of her front teeth had been knocked out leaving only bleeding gums.

Not seeing any reason for conversation he examined his blood soaked hands and remarked calmly "I'm going to wash up and then I'm getting some air." But as he reached the door he paused briefly and looked back, "And M'gann… thanks for being so supportive, I'm feeling a lot better now."

After about 20 minutes alone M'gann was finally able to have a thought that didn't involve screaming internally at the sensation of one of her throbbing injuries. She arduously pushed out with one hand and with painful determination tried to get some purchase with her broken fingers so that she could move her body into a less awkward position.

But even flat on her back there was little difference to the amount of suffering she was experiencing. Both of her legs were broken and left at odd angles and her left kneecap was nothing but ground up powder now. A lot of blood had flowed out of her vagina and ass and there seemed to be little chance that her kidneys and other nearby organs were still functional under the black and purple tarp of bruises that covered her now oddly caved in midsection above her shattered pelvis.

Breathing was a torture of its own and she was certain that more than one of her broken ribs had punctured her lungs, which was why each breath felt like a blowtorch was being applied to her chest. With such pain beauty seemed like an unnecessary concern which was fortunate since her once proud breasts had been smashed into something like burger meat and her pretty face was virtually unidentifiable.

Staring upwards the ceiling seemed oddly fuzzy to her. She wasn't sure if something was wrong with her left eye but knew with resignation that the right eye was gone, the whole socket had been caved in and anything there had been pulverized. Part of her skull was cracked open too and she was probably pressing some of her grey matter directly into the dirty floor but it would take a while before she would know of any brain damage.

With a groan she concentrated and after several moments of extra misery a broken bone in her pinky finger snapped back together accompanied by a tortured cry. With her shape shifting powers she could repair her entire body one piece at a time in the same way that a dislocated arm could be fixed, by accepting the pain and popping it back into place.

Of course there was a lot to mend from countless broken bones and damaged organs to an entire eye that would have to be regenerated so she was going to be at this all night. No human could understand the living hell that still awaited her as she healed herself; their bodies would have already failed from the damage and their minds would shut down from the pain involved in fixing it. But the important thing was that she would be whole by morning and physically she'd look good as new when the rest of the team saw her.

Hopefully tomorrow would at last be one of Conner's good days and she could try that thing the blonde had done with her tongue; she was excited to see if he would cum as hard as the man in the video had. And if he was in the same mood he'd been in tonight then without question she'd help him deal with his anger issues again by providing him with whatever outlet he needed for as long as he needed it. She'd readily accept any amount of pain he inflicted on her body if it would help ease the pain he felt in his mind.


Well your writing technique is definitely better than a lot of the people around here, and I do love having someone else who appreciates how adorable M'gann is <3

it's definitely not my taste, and you made me hate Superboy on a level that is going to make it hard to watch his scenes again, but it's definitely an interesting take



Much obliged for taking the time to read and give feedback.

Regardless of what I wrote here I do find season 1 M'gann to be absolutely adorkable and I really miss that version of her character. I wasn't trying to be mean to her which is why I tried to write her as bravely self-sacrificing rather than as a simple victim. What I really wanted to look at was Conner's disturbing rage and lack of a developed personality to balance it out in the first season.

I also appreciate your compliment on my writing technique. I know this story wasn't to your taste (was it the heavy violence, the characters it was directed at, or both?) but if you have a prompt (Young Justice S1, no feet/pegging/scat/male-on-male) I'd love to give it a try and see if I can write something that you'll enjoy reading.

If I continue with this story it will still have some similarly dark themes but won't need the same excessive gore and violence. That was there to compensate for the lack of any sexual content which I'd lean toward but didn't have a place for in this scene. I have ideas for 2 scenes to complete it. The next one would still follow the idea of M'gann helping Conner control his rage by letting him hurt her, but this time in a more rape centered incident. The last scene would wrap things up by following the unexpected way that this leads to them breaking up prior to season 2.


For me, what I didn't like was Conner's callous treatment of M'gann after it was over. This was like a bdsm session but with no after care and made me hate Conner as a person. Even more so because I was quite fond of M'gann in the series.

I concur with Ellen though, you have a good writing style and this was easy to read.


Anonymous nailed part of it for sure, I don't really care about accuracy, there's no reason to stick to canon, but even then, I don't like M'gann getting hurt like that by someone who doesn't show affection, doesn't feel bad, and at least offer love afterwards.

asidefrom that, it's just more personal taste, I'm not super into graphic messy beatings, or tbh hetero sex, lol. it is your story, i am not trying to say do or don't do anything, we all write what we like :)

as far as your ideas to follow up, the idea of M'gann being hate-fucked still makes me very sad, but it would be less unsettling than her being beat half to death by someone she loves.


1) M'gann isn't familiar with Earth customs, so when the team wants to roast her for a holiday, she knows it will kill her, but it's an earth tradition!

2) M'gann (perhaps coming off of one of the abusive stories) has left Conner for a female companion. if you don't want snuff, they could just play. if you want snuff, most of the female members of the team are human, and M'gann IS a Martian and super strong, accidents happen ;)

3) M'gann is with another female member of the team and they are captured. fight to the death or choose one to be snuffed, or one is forced to execute the other, or a double cross, but some form of 'only one gets to live'.

not sure if any of those tickle your fancy at all. tbh I will keep reading regardless, my reservations weren't particularly strong. just keep sharing the love of an excellent, underappreciated show! <3


Honestly, I love this story. Really brutal beatings isn't something you see enough of around here. I'm super into misogynistic women who see themselves as nothing but tools and outlets for abuse, and who embrace it. M'gann offering herself up to get the piss beat out of her is fucking hot. I don't even see this as Conner being mean to her, I see this as M'gann being mean to herself. I really hope to see more of it!

Since you mentioned prompts, I'll throw my hat in the ring. Have you ever considered doing anything where one of the girls helps abuse another girl? Off the top of my head, something like Miss Martian using her psychic power to push Artemis toward being a self-destructive rape toy so that M'gann can get off on it.


Usually, I don't like fan fiction. because typically things go way out of character and I actually never seen those series anyway
But since this story got so much response I had to check it.

Considering the age of superboy I think his behavior is pretty reasonable LOL
but I actually would not consider it an erotic guro story but more like serious psychological drama.
So you failed the "boner test" lol

In some way, it reminds new "Mai chan daily life" which also shifted from erotic guro to serious story.

I agree with you about Megan, but the author either deliberately or accidentally failed to portray her insanity in this way and presented it mostly like unreasonably strong love and dumb sacrifice instead of actually her doing what she wants herself.

I actually also love insane women like that and if the story clearly makes it evident that she is manipulating him into raping her it would be pretty hot. ;)



I read these prompts earlier and I started with the idea that I might do one but I quickly got ideas for all three.

The first one is close to being done and I think it's what you asked for. Upon rereading the second I realize that I missed it by a mile but hopefully you like what I came up with. The third one I made some deliberate changes, mainly I thought the concept worked better with Artemis and Zatanna because they're especially close and I have a specific scenario that only works for them.


It's a lot more obvious to me now that it's pointed out. Normally I wouldn't recon something but since it was my first try on this type of thing and I want to continue it I'm going to put up a 'redux' version to hopefully fix it.

Apart from barely held in violent rage my biggest take away from Conner's character during season 1 was that he was robotic; he didn't know how to be a person yet so he would literally stare at static while still covered in cake dough. However I can see now that he needs to have some humanity to be useful for further story telling.


I can think of a few ways M'gann might abuse her powers like this, I'll see once I'm done with the others.


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This for the first prompt, I couldn't help tacking on something for myself at the end. I hope this is what you wanted so tell me if you liked it (or what you didn't like)


Happily humming to herself M'gann grabbed a wooden spoon and began stirring the contents of a bowl cradled in her arms while walking the length of the countertop inspecting all of the things she'd laid out and comparing some of them to the cookbook floating beside her. Coming to the end where a turkey sat in a roasting pan ready to be prepared she gave herself a nod and smiled. The team was going to love the meal she had planned for them.

"Wow what's all this? It looks like you've got enough here to feed an army" said Zatanna as she and Artemis wandered in the kitchen together.

Putting the bowl down M'gann went over to hugged them both, she was so glad that everyone on the team had agreed to come over today even though she hadn't told them exactly what it was for. Artemis and Zatanna were the first to arrive and since they were here it didn't seem like there was any need to keep it a secret anymore.

"I'm making Thanksgiving dinner!" she said with a big smile, "I've got mashed potatoes, cranberry sauce, sweet potato casserole, sweet potato casserole and of course the turkey."

Both of the girl's expressions changed to one of puzzlement when M'gann listed the last item but it was Artemis who voiced her confusion first. "I don't want to be a downer but why a turkey?"

"Because that's what everyone eats on Thanksgiving, a roast turkey. Right?" said M'gann as her tone made a rapid transition from confident to questioning and finally to mildly distressed. "They showed it very clearly in the TV special, I watched it five times."

"Um, M'gann. Just how old was that TV show?" asked Artemis pointedly.

Not wanting to drag this out Zatanna jumped in to explain. "What Artemis is trying to say is that turkey has been out of style for, ah, several decades. Nowadays it's traditional to celebrate Thanksgiving with roast girl meat."

"Oh" said M'gann dejectedly, "I… I didn't know that." She'd put so much effort into making a holiday meal she hoped her friends would enjoy and somehow she'd messed up the most important part.

Of course she knew they wouldn't blame her, on Mars they didn't eat girls at all. But at the same time she didn't feel like she should be able to hide behind ignorance - she passed the shops selling girl meat everyday in Happy Harbor and she'd even tasted it during Spirit Week when the school picked a cheerleader and they all watched her being skewered alive and then slowly cooked over an open fire. Her friend Wendy had tasted pretty good.

Seeing how crestfallen she looked Zatanna wrapped a comforting arm around her shoulder, "It's not a disaster M'gann. You still made all this great food for us. Why don't we just forget the turkey and call it a nice team meal."

M'gann sighed as the other girl gently embraced her from the side. "But I really wanted to show everyone the perfect Thanksgiving, I was even preparing this great five herb seasoning for the roast" she said gesturing at the bowl on the counter.

"Well what's stopping you from using it?" asked Artemis, "I mean if we gave you some help couldn't you roast yourself?"

"That's a great idea!" Zatanna exclaimed, "I bet nobody's had the privilege of trying Martian-girl meat before, it could be the best Thanksgiving ever. What do you think M'gann?"

M'gann was justifiably surprised, "You'd really want to eat me?" Their enthusiastic nods left no room for interpretation but she knew that the real issue lay in the fact that being eaten would at some point involve her quite definitively dying. But at the same time her two friends looked so hopeful and excited at the idea. And she'd already invited everyone else on the team; she would feel really bad if she let them down. "Alright, how do we start?"


The girl sized roasting pan was just over six feet long, too big for many kitchen counters and so it came with its own cart that allowed it to be wheeled up to and then rolled into the kind of oven they needed.

Standing beside it M'gann nervously removed her crop top sweater and handed it to Zatanna and then started unbuttoning her shirt. As she handed over each article of clothing the idea that she was going to die became more and more real. Slipping off her pink cotton panties she realized there was nothing left to take off which meant that it was time to get on the roasting pan.

Studying M'gann's clothing as she folded it up neatly Zatanna absently asked "Hey, do you think this outfit would look cute on me too? Do you think I should take it?"

For a second the question seemed odd before she tapped the side of her head for being so short sighted. "Hello Megan! Of course you should take it; I won't be wearing it ever again."

Once she was on the pan Artemis helped position her hands over her stomach and tied her wrists together with twine while Zatanna was doing the same with her ankles. With small brushes they set about coating her body with the final recipe that she'd been working on earlier. It wasn't cold like she thought it would be and she could smell the small bits of herbs and spices as it settled on her skin.

As Artemis got to her breasts M'gann drew in a sharp breath. The sensation as the soft bristles danced across her nipples was certainly not something she had been expecting to feel while being prepared for cooking. Artemis smirked and repeated the action, clearly aware of what effect it had on her.

"Already enjoying being a meat girl?" she said with a smile as she paid extra attention to the way she coated M'gann's bust, caressing her tits until M'gann finally gave in to the pleasure and groaned appreciatively. "Hey Z, are you just about ready to give M'gann some extra flavor down there?"

M'gann didn't know what she meant but Zatanna did. The other girl began to slide her brush along M'gann's pussy far more than was necessary to prepare it for cooking, teasing around M'gann clit until the Martian girl was moaning obscenely and all but begging to be touched there.

Captivated by the scene Artemis bit her lip and watched her soon to be dead friend withered in pleasure as Zatanna finally granted her wish and tweaked the little numb letting M'gann cry out in ecstasy. Flipping the brush over and working with the awkward placement of her legs Zatanna got the handle to M'gann's entrance and pressed it confidently into her moist tunnel.

M'gann was breathing fast now and not caring about the lewd sounds she was making as Zatanna fucked her with the improvised dildo, her thoughts about dying and being eaten mixing freely with the pleasure she was experiencing. Would Conner get this kind of enjoyment when he was devouring her flesh she thought? Would she have offered herself up as meat sooner if she'd known it would be this good?

Feeling herself reach a crescendo M'gann shuddered and squirted clear fluid all over Zatanna's hand. Raising it to her mouth the female magician stuck out her tongue and licked at the girl juice, messily lapping it up and getting it all over her face. "Mmm that's good stuff" she murmured and offered her hand to Artemis who sensually sucked each finger clean.

Wanting a little more Artemis pulled Zatanna closer and kissed her with an open mouth, both girls sucking each others faces trying to get every last drop. Parting lips Artemis looked hungrily at Zatanna for a moment but then remembered they were still in the middle of something. "It is good; she's going to taste perfect once we roast her" she agreed.

M'gann idly wondered who would be eating her pussy after it had gotten so much attention. She could probably ask but she wasn't sure if it was bad etiquette, since the one thing she did know was that once she was meat she didn't have any say in what happened to her. Making it seem like she was dictating who ate each part of her might be rude and she didn't want to ruin the holiday.

Her thoughts were interrupted when Artemis snapped her head to the side and shouted "Wally!" and "Get out of here you pervert."

Looking over the edge of the tray M'gann could see that Wally had snuck into the kitchen and was coming over to join them. Her smile became one of awkward embarrassment since there was nothing she could do to prevent him from seeing her naked and her cheeks went even redder when she realized he'd probably seen her performance a few moments ago. However it shouldn't bother her if he did she thought, in a few hours he would probably be chowing down on one of her breasts anyway.

Zatanna seemed to have similar thoughts as she pushed aside Artemis's objection. "He's going to see it later so why not let him look while she's still alive, I mean she's already on the tray so she's meat anyway. Come over and enjoy the view Wally" she said and waved her hand over M'gann's shiny naked skin.

M'gann was intently aware as Wally approached and made a leering examination of her body. She'd brushed off his many lustful advances but now that she was officially meat he'd be within his rights to do whatever he wanted to her.

"Oh yeah, she looks like she'll be real tasty. But then you always looked tasty to me babe" he said still flirting shamelessly. Looking back up at the others he added "You know I'd be happy to give you two an extra hand to finish preparing her, maybe give the cooking a man's touch."

In response Artemis threw out an arm to block him and firmly stared him down. "You'll be keeping that baster of yours in your pants if you know what's good for you. We're all going to be eating M'gann and some of us don't want to taste your special sauce inside of her."

Having gotten over her embarrassment M'gann giggled at their antics. She was really going to miss the way those two argued with each other. "Thanks for offering to help Wally but I guess Artemis is right. I hope you enjoy me once I'm done cooking."

Wally followed his cue to get lost but at the last moment Zatanna's had a devilish idea. "Hey, how would you like to be in charge of cooking Artemis for Christmas?" she called out as he disappeared around the corner.

"Shut up" the blonde hissed and M'gann could see her face turning beat red. Obviously the suggestion of giving Wally free reign over her body had given Artemis a lot of embarrassing thoughts to consider.

With the kitchen back to being the girl's domain they added garnish and vegetables around her and finally it was time to go in the oven. Zatanna opened the big door and Artemis rolled the tray up and unfastened it from the cart. "Well it was nice knowing you" she said as she gave the tray a push so that it slid in smoothly on the well oiled rollers.

"It was nice knowing both of you too" M'gann called back as her head entered the warm oven followed by the rest of her body. She could hear the door close and the outside latch lock into place cutting her off from her last human contact. The heat was already starting to feel oppressive and without the outside light the small coffin like space seemed even more claustrophobic.

M'gann tampered down on the dread that filled her by reminding herself that she'd be dead soon anyway. It was certainly an interesting way to go, humans had such fascinating customs and they'd made the whole six months she'd spent on Earth feel incredibly special.


"So…" Zatanna started awkwardly, "How is everyone liking it?"

"It is certainly… unique" answered Kaldur stiffly.

"It's kind of, err, gamey" added Dick.

Seeing the others agree Wally's shoulders slumped, "Yeah, let's just admit that it looked a lot better than it tastes."

Silently a plate was passed around and everyone transferred their remaining portions of M'gann onto it. When it reached the end of the table Conner bent down and placed it on the floor where Wolf sniffed the alien meat inquisitively and then began gobbling it up.

Seeing how dour he and the rest of them looked Zatanna leaned forward and got Wally's attention. "Hey, it's not like today was a complete loss" she reminded him.

The speedster's face lit up as he remembered what they'd worked out while M'gann was busy cooking in the oven. "That's right! We've still got a whole month to prepare Christmas dinner" he exclaimed excitedly.

Sitting between them in the nude Artemis let out a mortified groan as she felt Zatanna lean into her and boldly reach between her legs while Wally happily snuggled against her other side and squeezed one of her breasts. The rest of the team chuckled in good spirits as they glanced at the shiny new meat tag attached to her ear bearing the initials W.W. and Z.Z.


I always love cann and especially consensual cann. Thank you YJ_Anon. M'gann and friends were perfect in this and I loved how sweet she was. It was a nice little twist that her meat ended up being terrible lol! A follow up with Artemis would be awesome!



Thanks. I do have a follow up thought out so if everyone wants to see it I'll get to work on it. It focuses on Artemis who has a tsundere like reaction both to being eaten (trying to pretend it doesn't excite her as much as it really does) and to Wally as she claims she's only into girls. It will have a mix of both lesbian and hetro content but with her denial of being turned on by dick just as much as pussy being a focal point during her month long preparation and eventual cooking.

If you have any prompts for Young Justice I'd love to hear them.


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I only had a vague memory of the second prompt when I came up with this, that's why it's so different but I think I checked off at least one of your wishes. Please tell me what you think.

FUN AT THE FAIR (prologue)

M'gann walked along with Artemis and Zatanna as the three girls made their way through Happy Harbor's High School charity fair. There was candy and performers and all kinds of games to try. Passing an attraction with an impressively large water tank M'gann took an interest and read the sign.


Drawn above it in marker was a student's rendition of a stick figure girl with blonde hair landing into the water. M'gann turned to her own blonde friend and pointed at the likeness. "This looks like fun, would you like to go up there and try it with me Artemis?"

"What, are you still mad that I was flirting with Conner?" Artemis snorted.

M'gann smiled at her friend's gentle ribbing. "Maybe a little" she joked and they eyed each other mischievously.

"Well?" prompted Zatanna, "Are you going to get up there so M'gann can take a shot at it or are we going to stand around all day?"

Artemis sighed, "If she really wants me to do it then I'll do it." Seeing M'gann nod her head she turned to Zatanna and, seemingly on an impulse, gave the surprised magician a kiss on the lips before blurting out "Wish me luck" and then scurrying up the wooden staircase. An attendant at the top helped secure her in the seat that would drop away if someone hit the bullseye hard enough.

Meanwhile M'gann was paying the student in the target area who in return handed her 3 balls to throw. "For an extra $5 we'll take a special overhead photo for you if she goes in" he offered.

M'gann was starting to turn him down but Artemis interrupted from her perch over the water "Hey! If you're going to try and dunk me you should at least get a picture." M'gann shrugged and paid the extra $5 before stepping back to the line she was supposed to throw from.

Her first attempt missed, the ball was quite heavy and passed well below the target that would trigger the mechanism to get Artemis wet. Putting more strength into her second throw simply made her aim wild and the ball whizzed several feet to the side of where she had intended. "You throw like a girl" laughed Artemis who now seemed certain that she'd be leaving the chair by the dry route. "Sorry that I made you pay that extra money for nothing" she said mockingly.

Lifting the last ball M'gann considered Artemis's boastful confidence and had a wicked thought. Winding up she threw another hard one but this time gave it a subtle assist with her telekinesis to help the ball stay on course. As planned it struck the middle of the target with a loud clang. Artemis had only a split second to be surprised before the chair fell away and she shrieked while being plunged into the water making a big splash.

Chuckling at her cleverness M'gann stepped around to the front of the tank where several other onlookers were already watching Artemis hold her breath underwater. Embarrassingly for the archer her white t-shirt now clung to her chest and the nearly transparent soaked fibers make it clear to everyone that she hadn't worn a bra today.

M'gann was just about to say something about the titillating show Artemis was giving when she noticed a chain leading to a set of heavy weights now resting on the bottom of the tank. "I don't think the she can get back out with those attached to her ankle" she remarked to Zatanna with growing concern.

"It's supposed to work that way" replied Zatanna matter-of-factly, "Otherwise most girls wouldn't remain underwater long enough to drown. I'm sure they have a hook or a winch to pull her body out once they're ready for next girl to try it."

It was only then that M'gann realized the consequences of what she'd done. This wasn't the first time she'd been caught off guard by the way things were different on Earth and many of those times had been because of the same thing, the seemingly trivial manner in which a girl's life was regarded by both herself and her fellow humans.

After some embarrassing incidents she'd endeavored to try and respect and assimilate into Earth's culture despite her initial apprehension. Knowing now that drowning was a normal feature of this game M'gann had to firmly remind herself that neither her friends nor Artemis would appreciate it if she made a scene over nothing. She'd only draw attention to herself with such strangeness and that could compromise her secret identity as a Martian and as a superhero which would be bad for the team and Justice League.

Of course even though Artemis seemed calm and indifferent to her fate that didn't mean she was going to stay that way forever. Zatanna's explanation was correct and once Artemis's body realized her oxygen was getting low it caused her more primitive reflexes to kick in. In class M'gann had learned that this was called the 'fight or flight' response and humans retained this evolutionary baggage despite it no longer serving any purpose in girls.

Filled with the fear of her ape ancestors Artemis began to pull against the chain to get her leg loose, twisting and jerking her body in an attempt wiggle the manacle off her ankle. When that didn't work she tried to reach the surface anyway, kicking and paddling with her arms in a futile attempt to overcome the weight holding her down.

All around M'gann people were watching Artemis's life and death struggle with great interest, some of them had even gotten out their phones to capture a video of the pretty young girl drowning for their amusement.

"She's certainly got a lot of spunk" one woman remarked favorably.

"Look at how her tits are bouncing around when she tries to shake free, that's so hot" said a young man in a group who was watching with one hand moving inside his pants.

Swimming toward them Artemis pounded her fists against the window. Maybe in her panic she thought she could break the glass thought M'gann. She certainly couldn't be appealing to anyone for help since watching girls die was one of Earth's most popular forms of entertainment.

"She looks so desperate to get out before she dies. Her lungs must be burning for air, I wonder if I'll get to go out like that" speculated a preteen girl with obvious admiration.

M'gann watched as Artemis made a last attempt to swim back up, her arms managing to break the surface with desperate splashes but her head always remaining frustratingly short of her goal. Eventually though she slowed and then finally went still, her arms going limp as her corpse slowly rotated in place on the end of the chain.

"Well that was exciting" remarked Zatanna as she retracted a hand from her waistband and licked her fingers clean. She'd clearly been one of the people making the most of Artemis's final moments. "And that was an amazing shot M'gann, they make it really hard to hit that target but you nailed it" she noted with little envy.

"Yeah, I guess I did" M'gann replied.

Zatanna didn't seem to notice any lack of enthusiasm on M'gann's part as something else had already captured her interest. "Oh hey, there are the boys! Let's go see what they've found" she said and ran off to catch up with them.

M'gann was still feeling a slightly stunned when the attendant handed her an instant photo. As advertised it was taken from above showing a close up of Artemis's face with her eyes wide and bubbles coming from her mouth as she tried to claw her way back to the surface, the last seconds of her life captured on film. It would forever serve as a reminder to M'gann that she had snuffed one of her friends on a whim.

With her goal of fitting in on Earth she wasn't sure if that would eventually be a good memory or a bad one. However looking down the concourse she observed how the boys were talking to Zatanna and gesturing with excitement toward an attraction featuring bows and arrows. She realized that being one of the two girls left on the team meant that forever might not be a very long time anyway.


Originally this was conceived as only a short but along the way I thought up a lot of ideas for how it could be completed as a full story. If you'd like me to write the rest let me know. Since the initial twist is over it'll be more direct and less teasing, following M'gann, Zatanna and the boys as they explore the school's fair where the games and attractions mostly involve girls being casually snuffed. Like I said, leave a comment if you think I should continue this idea.


this is really good!


please write the rest with M'gann eventually picking the most *fun* attraction to try on the fair…

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