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(I am not sure if this is the right place, but /req seemed like the wrong choice).

I am about to finish a new story, and I would like a little help proof reading it. If anyone would like to help, the tags are M/f, MMM+/f, F/f, cons, first, anal, throating, bukkake, lesbian, impalement, snuff.

I am interested in knowing what you think to see if I can change something to improve it. Keep in mind that this time its not one of the dark stories I usually write (note the consensual tag).

If you want to help, let me know and we can get in touch.


Hey there, Eficient!
I'm pretty okay with grammar and spelling and stuff and would be happy to proofread for you!
We could get in contact through the IRC, maybe, or any other way that you have in mind!


Precise writing has always been one of my strongest points; I'd be glad to help. You can contact me here:
Or on the IRC; my nick is usually casual_sadist.


Hey, I am assuming Acherontias help will be sufficient but let me just say how happy I am that youre adding more (semi-)consentual stories to your library. :)

Is there somewhere where people can read all your stories btw? Gurochan already lost bunch of them. :S


Thanks! I prefer to do it over email if you can (its a bit quicker for me). If you want to let me know and I will give you my address.

Thanks man, I sent you an email a minute ago.

Glad you like them! This one will be completely consensual (someone told me I didn't do enough of those on my last stories so this one will have to make it up).
As for a site, I don't have one yet. I wanted to make a site were I could upload some pictures I also have (reference for the stories) but its not easy. I am looking into uploading them to ASSTR in the meantime.


I am still looking for someone, so if you are interested and you liked my stories, let me know!


If we discussed in a private IRC chat you could send me a Google Drive link so I can read through in one tab and give you my thoughts in another.

Also, what's all this about people complaining about non-con? all I see in /lit/ is cons!


Thanks for the offer. Unfortunately I ran out of time to work on the story so I decided to post it as is, otherwise it would just ended up unfinished for ever. It shouldn't be to bad to read, so if you have time I would still like your opinion.

Its called XXXpresso!


Soooo what happened to Eficient? Did he get his website up yet?

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