I think that your lolis have a bit old faces, they look like adults and maybe even middle aged adults.
You could make them younger and more cute.
Ignoring that it is good work, but not something someone woud buy.
Love child snuff/necro its is so hot
You should work on making the faces look more young, also try more flat shading.
Please stop spamming /art/ threads with art from other people. It's not what /art/ is for.
Love lolicon snuff/necro any know any Good sits with that