No.32494[Last 50 Posts]
I have quite a lot of projects going, but one more will not hurt LOL fortunately it is practically finished anyway.
This time, a story in Aoi Hikari style. If you know what it means. ;)
Story idea from this artist https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=2336314
Unlike most of my other stories it will actually end with death.
Ok, so this will be enuogh for today.
I will add more pictures when I will put text on them.
It seems to me she is already showing him something interesting. Haha! Looking forward to more of the story, Onix!
Can confirm, starting new and new stories without finishing any of the old ones is indeed my stile :-)
I'm totally looking forward to the story, but what is with all the spatial anomalies? On the second picture that small pool looks pretty close to the large one, but on the second from last the large one is nowhere to be seen, then it appears again on the last picture, but seems further away than it used to be. Also on the second from last picture the small pool is deep enough for kids to stand in it submerged if not fully then at least to their necks, and it's totally not some weird illusion due to water bending light because on the same picture the girl has her lower legs lowered vertically which is impossible with the setup from the last picture, which is why on that last picture her pose is different and she has her legs stretched out now.
You are so observant ;) LOL
But that was actually me screwing up the first picture and I expected that nobody will notice ;)
My other stories do not really have endings they can continue forever while this one will end. So when I mentioned your style it is similar to the the Rin and Len stories. >>32506
Haha yes but there will be something more ;)
It happens that adding text sometimes takes more time than making pictures :)
But here is the next part
the whole story has a bit over 50 pictures.
I wonder if you can guess where it is going :)
Nice pics, Onix. I can't believe they would be stupid enough to slip off the diving platform with no water in the pool, or would they?
You can be the reincarnation of Sherlock Holmes LOL
But you are only 80% right since as I mentioned It is in the story Aoi Hikari style.
If he slips off the diving board, I wonder what he can grab to save himself. Hmmmmmm?
Slip? Eh, that would be boring.
If it is indeed inspired by my Len and Rin stories, it would be more like "but if there's no water it only means that we die if we jump, not that we can't jump at all" "oh, you're right! let's go then!"
Though given the relationship so far I can also imagine one of the kids pushing the other off.
Yes, in fact that was my original idea when I started this story.
but that would be also a bit too plain if they just jump so I have something more interesting ;)
Cool, let's see it then :-)
Can't wait for more
you can have it a couple different ways. She dives in and breaks her neck. Or he tosses her from the diving board when she's falling she losses her bladder.
Ok I guess I will torture you a bit with waiting LOL
I already have full story but got tired uploading it. So I will finish it later.
Also this way there will be less spoilers ;)
Damn you tease :-)
So this is all story.
Kinda the first time when I managed to complete something. :)
But maybe I will add some epilogue later so it may be not the end after all.
Since I will later upload it to pixiv please tell me if you see some errors in the text.
Or if you think some text can be changed/added to be more interesting.
What for the text, on the first pic there's a space before the dot which shouldn't be there, also should be "Can't wait" and "They've just finished". Second picture "I've never seen". Also throughout the text you don't have a dot in the end for most of the sentences, which doesn't seem to be intentional because for some you do.
Good stuff Onix (Even though I don't usually care for this kind of thing).>>32577
Should be "Damn" not "Dam".>>32567
They seem to be floating in the air?>>32590
God that's epic!
Thanks for the pics, Onix. If uploaded elsewhere, the title should be "A Very Strange Story" rather than "Sotry." The crash scene in 32590 looks pretty good. Nice renders!
Hehe silly but fun! I really enjoyed it :-D Your CG girls are just too cute! I want one :-P
It was pretty hard to make this story at least moderately sensible and not too boring LOL>>32599
Since this is quite strongly related to your work, I think you should give more extensive judgment if you would do something different ;)
I wonder how accurately I managed to replicate that mood while also trying to make it reasonable>>32608
I think when I will be uploading it somewhere else I will try to thing some other title.
Unfortunately, it is impossible to edit your own posts on gurochan so it is stuck with that mistake in the title even if I noticed it almost immediately.
that Crash picture was the hardest of all, you cannot imagine how long it took to cover everything with blood like that :)
Actually my intention was to make something very crazy so that people would read it with interest but in the end, they were left totally confused thinking what the hell happened ;)
depending on how you look at it this story can be either very silly or also very serious ;)
Give that girl a Darwin Award!
Haha this comment wins!
Hey, she didn't do it because she was stupid, she did it because it was fun :-)>>32618
Well, it's hard to judge how I would do that, because it's a different medium from what I do. In text I can just spell out the characters' thoughts and emotions, while pictures are more focused on visuals. One thing that comes to my mind is that when the girl said "just try it" (rip her piercing off) for a moment I thought she actually means it without sarcasm, like if he wants to see what happens he should just go and try it, and then he would actually rip it off and fall because he had to pull hard and she would laugh at his fall.
Another thought I had before you posted the ending was how it might go with one kid jumping first and not dying immediately, and the other asking how was it, and the jumped kid would say something along the lines of "the landing is somewhat rough, but the flight felt awesome, totally worth it", then the other jumps too and confirms it is indeed a very enjoyable experience, then as they look at each others eyes with happy smiles and expressions like "see, told you it would be fun" "yeah, it totally was", they contentedly bleed out.
But your ending is fine too.
One thing that comes to my mind is that when the girl said "just try it" (rip her piercing off) for a moment I thought she actually means it without sarcasm, like if he wants to see what happens he should just go and try it, and then he would actually rip it off and fall because he had to pull hard and she would laugh at his fall.
You made my very angry because I did not thought that myself LOL
but yeah that woud be a great idea and extremely relevant to the plot.
Not dying immediately at this situation is kinda impossible :)
but again that kind of ending is also good. maybe I will use those ideas for some other story >>32622
You now, that actually could be an idea for a new title. Maybe for entire new series with same characters :) because there are lots of stupid ways to die.
You should continue on with the story. A janitor finds her body
It is possible that I continue it after all adding some more funny scenes.
But not doing anything to move dead body, because scene will break apart.
> Not dying immediately at this situation is kinda impossible :)
Life pro tip: you don't have to land on your head. Wikipedia says "Overall, the height at which 50% of children die from a fall is between four and five storey heights above the ground".
> You now, that actually could be an idea for a new title. Maybe for entire new series with same characters :) because there are lots of stupid ways to die.
Why the same characters? It sounds like it should be a competition between various characters to get the award. Like they treat it like an actual award and each tries to come up with the most silly way to die.
Yes, meant that it is not possible to survive if falling on the head or on the belly.
if you hit hard concrete. it would be possible if she falls on the legs but it will be too hard to show the results in 3d LOL
It can also be different characters, but using same ones kinda makes an illusion that they are immortal even if those are unrelated stories like in your stories where they die over and over ;)
Another reason is that creating new characters for every story is a bit some of the extra work. So maybe I will limit differences to changing their hair. It may be the same boy and different girls as well. or twin girls since twins render like one character in terms of resources.
In the end, someone probably has to survive or else there is nobody to observe the death. ;)
In my opinion, it is also funnier if characters do not explicitly declare their desire to kill themselves, but find some other way to justify it.
By the way, some time ago when I was into roleplay, I met one girl who was into things like that where she was into killing herself various ways :)
Oh yes forgot to mention that maybe she was not stupid but this is a really stupid way to die and that is what makes it funny. ;)
I kinda want to have that kind of dual meaning like some prank where it is not entirely clear why it happened.
Very well then, curious to see what you'll come up with.
One way to solve the "my character is dead but I don't want to design a new one" problem is a world of clones.
Silly, suicidal clones.
Well, who would possibly clone suicidal kids to watch them snuff themselves?
(Suicidal as in "reckless and not caring about their own demise" - not necessarily the emo goth version, although that can be made fun, too )
> Well, who would possibly clone suicidal kids to watch them snuff themselves?
lol, who wouldn't :-)
Though I don't really like the clone idea, because carelessly dying doesn't sound as careless when there'll be more of you anyway.
Well, clones are unnecessary it is just lack of continuity like in most TV series.
You know in one episode character died or something else happened next episode it is fine and has no clue about anything that.https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/DeathIsCheap
But looks like it is not necessarily always going to end with immediate death.
Splyf's Trine and Christine are always alive again for the next story with no explanation so I don't see why your characters couldn't be the same :-)
Those ideas may be useful for torture festival thread more than here.
Cute girls! Looking forward to seeing more of the new story. Hmmm…I don't suppose any sea gull insertions would be fatal, at least not for the girls. Ha! Keep those excellent renders coming, Onix!
First there's the dare challenge… for example two contestants each insert a water hose into their butt/pussy and turn themselves into waterballoons. Whoever pulls out first loses…
the rules don't explicitely say if bursting counts as win or lose, but it might be messy ;)
variants possible with self impalement, cutting, strangling, …, …
very closely related the attempt to one-up each other on activities that get increasingly dangerous/deadly. Including self mutilation, cutting of limbs, etc… or inserting stuff leading to self impalement on thicker and thicker pins/nails/spears/poles/…
Or alway popular among kids, playing doctor: measure each others fever, probe orifices, conduct a cesarean, open heart surgery or the ever popular life dissection…
variants include playing "morgue" (coroner, pretend corpse) or "prison" (executioner / dead man/girl walking )
More "suicidal" is good old exploration/curiosity maybe over questions such as "if your head is cut off, you're instantly dead" "no! that's not true, heads stay conscious!" "I don't believe that"
"Ill prove it. I'm gonna cut my head of and then you ask me stuff, I blink once for yes and twice for no!"
Or also "its impossible to snap ones own neck" "no, it isn't!"…
Yet another popular thing is reenactment of magic shows. The getting sawn in half trick is always so fascinating. If one manages to do that to themselves: extra kudos.
"No, wait, I think you need to use a rope and squeeze your waist really really tight. then cut between the ropes, otherwise all your squishy things will come out!"
(might ease render effort ;) )
U could have 2 play hunter and deer, butcher and pig, … so many fun games that can go horribly wrong :)
Auro erotica would fit the bill, playing breath games for example
standing on a box with a rope around there necks and the box breaks just as they come
I like the idea of putting larger and larger objects in their pussy (and subsequently womb) until they're torn apart from inside. Maybe have a point where their womb is torn and the insertions are squishing their internal organs into pulp, but they still continue because they think they can get an even larger insertion, so why stop here. A fire extinguisher surely must be involved on the way.
Also the beheading idea reminds me of one of mine, where Len and Rin wonder what it feels like to be beheadead, so they behead Rin and Len looks into her eyes to see what she feels, and physically she feels immense pain that makes her only wish to die sooner so it would end, but the pain makes it feel like it lasts forever, but at the same time neither Len nor Rin herself regret anything, it doesn't even occur for them to regret it, they were curious what it would feel like and now they know, so their curiosity is properly satisfied, and there's nothing wrong with experiencing a pain so overwhelming it just makes you want to die as soon as possible, if that's what beheading ended up feeling like, then cool, now they know it.
As for girl twins, they might shove their heads into each other's wombs and suffocate. Maybe it's some sort of unbirth play, or maybe they just find it funny. Like they're casually 69ing and then one out of nowhere comes up with an idea to shove her head in her sister's womb. The other sister treats it maybe kinda like being tickled or maybe like some playful wrestling? Like she kinda minds it but not really, actually she finds it funny too, so ends up shoving her own head into her sister's womb too. Maybe there's some like not really serious fighting involved, where each sister tried to not let the other get into her womb, but not really, just having fun. So by the time the second gets inside the first one's womb the first one is already suffocated from all the fighting while inside her sister's womb. So then the second one goes "huh, you're already dead? oh well, all the fighting mane me kinda tired too" and relaxes, suffocating too.
A combination of the unbirth and beheading ideas is: one girl tries to get inside the other's womb, playing like she's her baby, but she can only get her head inside and laments about it, so the other girl decides to help and cuts her head off, this way if she's only a head, she's all inside like she wanted.
Another idea is the kids find something that is shaped like a dildo, but clearly not designed to go into one's pussy. Like a cylindrical grater. Before I used it in my Suspicious Silence story, I had an idea where Len and Rin see it like it a store and laugh about it like "lol that grater looks like a dildo" "haha it would tear my pussy to shreds" and proceed to actually trying it just for the laugh. But since I've already used the grater in the Suspicious Silence story, maybe you can come up with something else to the same effect. But I also wouldn't mind if you just use the grater.
A girl might impale herself on some pole, like maybe a sidewalk pole, but she isn't really trying to impale herself, but to see if she can perform a side split with that pole in her pussy, and in the end she can, although the pole ends up tearing her from inside and maybe exiting through her belly, maybe through her chest, missing the lungs and heart so she has time to admire her own gymnastic ability before she dies, maybe through her mouth, depending on how long it was to begin with. Anyway the girl is satisfied that she successfully performed a split and doesn't bother to acknowledge the fact she ended up impaling herself all the way through, like its totally irrelevant.
Oh, since we have two girls, it might start with one impaling herself just slightly on that pole to masturbate, then somehow the splits end up mentioned, and she just doesn't bother to get off the pole before giving a demonstration. The other girl can then help her sister by pushing her down on her shoulders.
Then instead of her dying it can end up with her just getting up (probably with the help of her sister) and they just go on their way, but the impaled girl has a gaping pussy and optionally a cervical prolapse, through which blood and pulped internal organs leak out, but they just go away not bothering to acknowledge that.
Love the way Black Raven thinks! Especially the execution or dissection games taken too far!
You have nice ideas, but this time I was thinking about how it is possible to die as not just get mutilated. (and also to do it in a somewhat questionable way without implicitly stating that it is going to end with death)
I may use execution game idea to do something very short.
but with the stories that end with death, you need to have a good plan on how it will all go ;)
One of the possible games is Guro version fo twister :)>>32760
You may see that idea with the grater in the slightly different form but I guess I better not spoil everything :)
Idea with the pole may be useful for gurovision thread as one of the performances
Hitchcock the birds attack the two girls
I started few more projects but they are way to big to show any results now
So I started one more short story based on the one Aoi Hikari writings ;)
I wonder if he already knows what it will be about ;)
I love to see how the "necklaces" works
Ha-ha, I think I have a pretty good idea :-)
I'm curious about the origins of what seems to be an already existing stain of blood on the carpet though.
hehe, it would be strange if you had no idea. LOL
As about carpet you made a good observation :) unlike other artists all details in my works have meaning ;) But it is not that straightforward and actually you will have to think yourself about it. ;) Although I would love to hear what came in your mind ;)
The overall purpose of all that is character development. She is now in her room unpacking a box.
Well, there doesn't seem to be any damage on the girl herself, thus so far I can only speculate that it might be from playing with her sibling or friend. Will the continuation reveal more about it, I wonder?
Hmm this new story puts me in mind of the "Fountains" story about the rock concert where everyone has to wear explosive collars! Let's see if that's where this is going… :-D
Yes, that's possible but also very straightforward.
But it also can be more "metaphysical" ;-)
Since it got some attention I will try to make an explanation later.
But you should not only focus on the bloodstain but on the whole room as well. ;)
Maybe it will make more sense later.>>33389
Probably I can move to another project because everyone knows the ending already LOL
But since I made more than half of the story I will finish it :)
Not all of us "newcomers"have seen your earlier stories, so I haven't a clue where the story is going. Please do finish it! Thanks!
I suppose that must be a continuity of my joke LOL
because the ending of the story is just as evident as the ending of Edward's stories that girl will be cooked eventually
I should post the next part today once I will add text to the pictures.
True but we want to see the circumstances! Who she wants to surprise and why! :-D
I will stop here today.
Not as much progress as usual (that's revenge for you Edward, for dragging your story so long. Now suffer while waiting until the next day LOL)
It will still continue for a little without guro content.
> You win if you cum before midnight
Shouldn't it be if he doesn't cum? Or if he makes her cum? Otherwise what's the challenge in it?
I really love the girls in your stories! My only tiny criticism is I found it a little hard to tell who was saying what in this panel. Maybe put their words in different colour text to help old folk like me out? :)
It is all right.
Even if it looks too easy, logically, if he has to cum to win, she will try to prevent it from happening somehow ;)
If what happens later will turn him off or he will run away he will fail and if he will like it, he will win and they can stay together ;)
Of course, if you were reading carefully you can notice a clue for the story ending. ;) >>33416
I think it was pretty obvious since bubbles are very close to the character who is saying them so I decided not to bother with arrows. The boy did not say anything besides "Wow! really?"
Maybe it was a bit confusing that I placed text into separate bubbles instead of one.
I suspect you got it all right after all, just started to doubt it ;)
Yes it was mostly that I doubted I was reading the flow of the conversation properly - it was the only panel where I had that issue 'though :-) I still love your girls! Can you "Weird Science" me one for my birthday? :-P
Hmmm. If it were me I'd be sucking those bandaids off with my mouth. Ha! Can't wait to see what happens next!
I also love how innocent and confused the boys are in these stories!
Today's part of the story ;)
When I started adding text it actually went a bit diffrent route than I planned initially and turned out quite a bit longer than I expected.>>33422
Actually that was totally unwanted feature at first because the first story actually felt as if that girl killed herself because she did not wanted to be with such a boy who does not show enuogh enthusiasm or takes any initiative ;)
So eventually she decided to give up and said "eh, screw it he is too boring I am leaving" LOL
And this is not what I wanted readers to think ;)
But there is just no way anyone can match this crazy girl anyway LOL
Maybe in some future story they will both die ;)
I had the same reaction as the boy to the second piercing ;-)
Curious to find out what she's hiding under the third bandaid!
I hope you will not be disappointed. She is very full of surprises ;)
It's almost impossible to guess what your crazy girls have planned - that's part of what makes them so much fun :-D
So that was the secret behind the last band-aid ;)
Poor boy may actually lose this game at this rate LOL
Nothing a sharp knife or scissors can't resolve. Haha! Great pics again, Onix. Love the needle through the bellybutton! Thanks for the update work.
Hehe, even then, who knows what other surprises await there. This girl seems to be very determined to make the boy fail while keeping him aroused to the max LOL
Also, unfortunately, there are no scissors in the bedroom but he will find some solution ;)
They will do nicely!
I love creative kids like these two :-)
Haha awesome! Kinda like this boy's cruel streak ;-)
Coitus Interuptis in extremus
Next step would be a razor blade piece hidden inside vagina?)
instead of the vagina having the razer blade how about the ass. He can force it in her there and have his dick split in two
LOL you are picking up quickly ;)
but the boy is not that stupid to risk stuffing his dick in her butt he is thinking exactly same as you ;)>>33543
This is one reason why I like lolis. Adults doing such things would be pretty awkward
How's our young hero getting on? Has he broken through the stitches yet?
I also really love her expression in this one!
I already have next batch of pictures ready, but still need to add text.
Although it is till missing the main event ;)
I am curious about the process as I have no knowledge of it what so ever. How long does it take to create one image? Is it a question of using stock elements that you assemble and customise or is each one worked completely from scratch? I enjoy drawing a lot but digital art is a complete mystery to me!
the process is pretty simple
Yes, I use stock elements most of the time and then assemble character I want. Later it can be slightly modified. Unfortunately, when its get into guro pictures you need to make stuff yourself wahst also includes some drawing.
The hardest part is actually to make a good visual representation of the character's mind. ;) so I have to try various styles until it gets right(biggest problem is to find proper hair) this is what takes most of the time initially and later when you have everything assembled you just play with them as with dolls LOL
One image may require 5-40 minutes to make, depending on how different it is from the previous picture.
Fortunately, this process is also way more enjoyable because you are more like a movie or photoshoot director than painter ;) I made some attempts in painting but meh, that's boring. I wonder how people manage to stay working on the same picture for a few hours or even days.
In comparison to drawn art, it is super quick to the level where one drawn picture is equivalent to entire 3d story.
Ah, thank you for explaining! It makes a lot of sense. I don't have the patience for painting either - did a little in school but it's not for me. I have a three-stage process - I draw the basic shapes/figures in pencil, go over them in a little more detail with an ink pen, rub out the pencil then add the fine detail and shading etc :-)
I will stop here for now.
It took quite some time to think good text with proper meaning ;)
and I actually totally unintentionally ended with the running joke LOL
You fiend! Now I'll be wondering all weekend what's going to happen. LOL! The kid better watch it; I think this girl is a crazy whack job!
His face is going to be priceless! I'm guessing the collar is now counting down? I wonder just how powerful the explosive is and if he will have a dick by the end of the story? Or if he will get to go home with a fun new sex toy?
Well, he is at home already, he said that this is his parent's bedroom.
By the way did anyone notice the difference between his and her home ;)
Also, I may spoil it a bit but this collar has no explosives it works in another way. :)>>33653
You will not need to wait for very long. I already have those pictures.
Oh yeah - her home had way more blood stains ;-) Hmm well I guess from the dialogue that the collar will decapitate her somehow? Springloaded blades perhaps? (I'm just speculating - don't expect you to say!) The facial expressions of your characters are what really make your work stand apart from others for me so I still can't wait to see his reaction! :-D
Well, her room looked way more shabby, and his home looks rather spacious, so I guess that means his family is richer than hers, but I have no idea what's the importance of that for the story.
Hmmm some kind of set-up so her parents can sue his parents? Or perhaps one of her parents works for one of his?
Wealth, of course, is not important to the story, but more importantly her room is very messy/dirty, what gives you idea about what kind of character she is. ;)
That would be way too sinister.
Oh well. I guess it means I'm not the only one whose thoughts are protected from reading :-)
Well her room is dirty and mouldy but not messy so that could say a number of things! I still want to know where the blood on her rug came from!It shouldn't be forgotten that the boy is quite a sadistic little fucker so there's a few ways this story could go…
Don't be leaving us in suspense too long, will you?
Actually, to tell the truth, not all of those thoughts even exist in my head either. They will come up later ;)
Things change meaning over time especially under the influence of other readers.
Now we are talking! That's quite an ideas.
But it will not get revealed that much here. this one specific story by itself has no super deep meaning but it is part of the bigger setting. Because as you see, same characters die several times here ;)
The secret of the blood on the carpet is actually pretty funny. I did not intend to have it at all but the room I used came with it. So I was thinking about removing it but then I decided that I will use it later.
In fact, this is how many of my stories are born, I get some 3d prop and think "hey that could be a part of this story."
I also will post next part today too
Aah now I'm wondering is she actually very old but just looks 13/14 which is why her house is so mouldy and rotten-looking?
Well actually the reason I used that room was because it was the messiest I could find for his purpose to represent her messy character and also for the upcoming joke.
But your suspicion has certain amount of truth in it. ;)
Although it is not supposed to be official part of the story narrative just something what should be suspected to explain what exactly is happening ;)
I think your stories have similar issues like how society manages to survive while cooking girls everyday and why it is so casual ;)
You just do not bother to provide any clues to explain that.
So that's the main event but story is not finished yet.
This makes me think what any of you woud do if such thing really happened to you? (assuming that you do not need to worry about police.)
Love the girl's expression here, Onix! She did ask whether he wanted her to give him a head. Haha! I giggled through this entire update.>>33691
If such a thing ever happened to me I'm doubtful anything sexual would occur. I'd be freaking out trying to clean my parents' bedroom and thinking of what to do with her body. Of course, it would have been priceless, if his mother had walked in on that scene!
An afterthought: assuming I got the mess cleaned up and calmed down a wee bit, I'd probably sneak the body off to my roomfor a wee while to see whether there was still a useable pussy behind those stitches.
since she is dead anyways, how about slicing her ass off then cutting into her butt hole to see if see did put a super glue bottle in her ass
I think she was lying ;)>>33692
Well her head fell right on his hard dick LOL he had no choice.
You know the chances of something happening are inversely proportional to the probability of that actually happening in fiction LOL
Huh, this makes me wonder if he's going to kill himself just so that he doesn't have to clean the mess and explain it to his parents.
Or alternatively leave his rich home and live in the streets, feeding off dumpsters, for the same reason.
Did she stay alive for a few moments after decapitation or she died instantly?
Oh for sure - I think that's an issue with all "Cannibalism is legal and normal" stories - why don't they run out of girls? Lol. I know some authors have attempted to adress it with multiple births being the norm or rapid aging but I think that alters the family dynamic too much and I want to keep my characters relatable :-) >>33682>>33690
Facial expressions are where you really excell! I am curious as to how the collar works 'though?
I knew the boy was "tweaked" as they used to say! lol. I wonder what he's going to do now? Maybe stage a break-in? Lol
Obviously Onix is the only one who knows for sure but, judging by the way her expression changes, I'd say she lives until just after he cums!
probably not maybe he will do something with the body ;)>>33715
well as I know heads stay alive for about 30 seconds after being cut off, so Edward is right
in the end it is unclear if she just died or had an orgasm LOL>>33716
The collar uses a cutting wire which gets tightened and cuts the neck off
I wanted to describe that in the story itself somehow but there is no opportunity to do that and it is not even visible visually.
As you already know from the previous story it is not the end of the world that she died. So he will get away with just being scolded a bit.
I was thinking about that issue quite a lot especially for roleplay purposes but as you say the ways to address those issues directly like using regeneration or mass births takes away all the fun from them to the level where it even breaks story logic.
So I decided that the best way is to give an idea that the is some explanation and it is not really that scary as it may look like but keep it a secret from readers and especially story characters so that it will not affect their feelings and actions ;)
He may not be in that much trouble over the dead girl as such but his parents might be pretty pissed off about all the blood on their bed!
I did wonder if it was a cheese-wire kind of thing - makes sense :-)
Yours is clearly a world where life is cheap and playful suicides aren't that big a deal but, since the boys usually seem surprised, they're probably not super-common either. Mind you, he should have taken a big clue when she let him push that long pin inside her belly - who knows what life-threatening internal damage that did and yet she was cool with it! lol.
But yeah, I like the idea of having the explanation in your head that may be hinted at from time to time but doesn't necessarily need to be part of the story. It's just helpful for you as the writer to have as vague idea - helps with "world-building" :-)
Hey, talking about how the universe works, have you guys seen this idea of mine?https://www.gurochan.cx/lit/res/6590.html#q15366
Amazing "bloodwork" here Onix. Did you do it all with decals?
I like the idea! I did joke around with a similar idea when I was trying to work out if I could possibly edit my stories to make them acceptable for sites with age limits!
That's right explaining all that mess will be a problem but now you see that this room looks even messier than her room
Considering that long pin it is something that is pretty frequently done in real life but almost never in fiction :) you can even find quite a lot of videos with that kind of content.
Actually the idea of this story is that he meets a crazy girl and the question is if he will freak out and run away at some moment or he will actually like it and stay ;) And she was pleased that the boy is also into same things as she is and that he gets more aroused :) she basically just shows him something and looks how he will react to that.
Sort of typical sociopathic behavior we all love so much when our partner does various stuff just for fun totally disregarding their own safety and future. But this also can bring us some trouble like this room covered in her blood.
To give you more fun facts I actually met a girl like that on the roleplay site some time ago. ;)
This world largely resembles Futurama, or "Invader Zim" it is not that suicides or behavior like that are very common but just nobody gives a shit about anything in terms of law enforcement or punishments are very insignificant.>>33736
I have seen that post but I guess I will reply on that thread what I think about it.
Yes, that's right. No texture editing at all.
I was planning to continue a little more but probably I will end this story here and move to another project. Unless something will come in mind.
Really liked the collar but short of walking into the next room and slapping it on her sister or something the story is over. Hope the collar comes back sometime in another story.
I don't think I will make a story so long as this with this collar but since you mentioned it I may bring it back for the very short time since I have a plan for new series made of many very short stories. So I can bring it back into one of them.
I'm a newcomer to this site and am not sure what sort of reaction you're hoping to elicit from your viewers, Onix, but I've enjoyed your last two stories and can't help but smile and chuckle at the dark humor and insanity of your cute characters. Good on you, mate!
Onix, if you did not give advice to those who wish to continue somehow and would rather follow what you originally wanted to create, then the story would not be flashy.
I do not understand what are you saying.
Fortunately Halloween is coming so she will make great decoration
Haha that's fun! I suspect she'd approve too :-D
Trick or Treat!… Her body really looks inviting, but if some halloween visitor tries to "use" her, there might still be some hidden surprises in there ;)
If only she could see that ;P
Onix is most likely done with this story but it's fun to imagine what other little boobie-traps she may have left :-D
I think he has to but a warning sign for clueless necrophiliacs LOL
Or I even don't know it myself what other traps there may be :)
Pretty sure those stitches are holding something in as well as keeping him out!
It's kind of curiuos that the bloodspatter only reaches the bed and not the wall……….
Probably she had not enuogh blood pressure to reach the wall :)
but the actual reason is because iray decals apply to single object only so I put one on the bed but none on the wall.
Thanks for your explanation. It's obvious that I'm not a 'tradesman'.
But I do love and respect your work, just like Drabok's.
Isn't it high time that you learned to FINISH a story?
No disrespect intended, Timon, but the girl's head came off and the kid set her head & body outside his house as Halloween decorations. The story seems pretty "finished" to me. Nice touch, Onix! Haha!
Umm yup! That final panel is pretty conclusive! I agree if it had finished just after her head came off I'd have had further questions but I agree with Thumper - it IS finished!
I think stories cannot realy end because they can be always continued unless my video card explodes while rendering and kills me LOL
But this time I just took a different approach. Instead of doing super long series I do shorter episodes.
As long as her slit is sewn shut, no one can convince me that this story has ended…..
So write or imagine your own sequel/spin-off :-D These fantasy scenarios have limitless potential!
you got everything wrong
It was never intended to be open, what the girl did was essentially to make him ask her to "give him head"
Her pussy was sewn shut so that he could not use it ;) (sure he could use a knife but why bother if she has 2 more holes?)
I was thinking what to do with her butt, maybe close it with some plug
or stuff it with something and then make a picture where he is trying to get his dick in without success. (or end with it all covered in shit LOL)
but since >>33557
>>33559 suggested that there can be a razor blade hidden inside I decided to make her say that :)
So now you know all logic behind this story:) I expected that is is pretty obvious but seems that it got other interpretations.
Although if people are so interested to get secret of her pussy and butt revealed
maybe I will make Halloween special ;)
that would be great to see for holloween
This is the Halloween special.
It was not planned at all and story was not intended to go this way.
Wow, that's a nice surprise!
That was an amusing continuation where I hadn't expected one, Onix. Thanks for the Halloween surprise! You never know what little pervert will wind up on your doorstep, eh?
Ha! So was she lying about the glue or is he stuck in there until she rots off now? :-P
( ° ʖ °) Aww man,I can't even describe your greatness with English.I'll stick to your content as always,and always looking forward to some new guro related fetish taking place in your series.Maybe we'll have some high-heeled little femboy smash by car next time?Please keep on surprising us !
Personally I expected a pencilsharpener, but this will do nicely. ;-)
Haha love it! Guess the "trick" was on him, huh? :-P
It is still unknown how that boy got his dick split. But I guess the site that sells prank decapitation collars also sells practical joke dick splitting devices. >>34298>Ha! So was she lying about the glue or is he stuck in there until she rots off now? :-P
You will see that soon ;)
Yeah the attempt to play the trick by violating the copse backfired. LOL
Nazi-boy seems to be taking the split dick pretty well! But I guess that figures in a world where a girl will cut off her own head as a prank! lol.
I kinda hope she's hanging around as a ghost to see the trouble she causes these boys!
well actually if you get cut with something super sharp it does not hurt that much sometimes you may not even notice it ;)
and If your friend got his dick stuck in the headless girl's ass that's too hilarious to think about your split dick.
But of course, it is not that big deal especially during Halloween :)
More laughs…good stuff, Onix! That'll teach those jerks you don't stick your meat into just any old corpse lying around!
If you run out of inspiration, you can allways turn to a West-European solution: the Zyliss Blitzhacker….
I hope this will satisfy you as proper end
But who knows, maybe she has a thermonuclear bomb in her belly and now it is going to explode and everybody dies LOL
By the way anyone noticed what was written on the box? It was a coincidence but kinda served as warning which those boys ignored LOL
The initial idea was that one more girl visits the house and plays the same trick but it turned out this way because of your big interest in the dead body ;)
Funny pics with a Halloween theme. Nice ending, Onix!
Onix! You did it! I bow to the master….
Lots of fun! Still love the girl's cheeky face!
Will there be more episodes with new characters?
Nice to hear that ;)
As for other series with other characters, I already posted a lot on gurochan.
latest ongoing series are here https://www.gurochan.cx/3dcg/res/33777.html
If you mean more episodes of this story there should be more of it later too, but probably I have to finish other stories first
Very nice, thanks for this!
What happened to nazi boy's balls though?
You 're richt on that part ;-)
But of now, you've prooved to be able to do that. So let's get on to it and offer every fan a handfull of completed stories on their hard drives… ;-)
Well maybe it was not too evident but when he tore another boy's dick the body fell and hit him in the balls with her spine so they kinda both got hurt at the same time :)
This girl has a very good aim for dicks as you know LOL
Aah I thought the cheese-wire that took her head off was still lodged in her neck somehow but that works too!>>34343
Yup I've seen your other stories :-) I was thinking more about this thread with the crazy girls who seem to think a good prank is worth dying for!
Speaking of which, have you ever read "The Big Book of Bunny Suicides"? Might give you some inspiration :-P
I have one idea for a new year.
And maybe some more
But it is pretty hard to find a way to die and present with a decent story which is not too stupid.
I have seen the book of bunny suicides. That could make a separate series but without any kind of story.
That could be fun - recreate them but with girls wearing bunny ears!
This is just a small nitpick but a few more images focusing on the boys' ruined crotches would be awesome
Since story already ended It is not that simple to add more pictures and I even have no clue what it should be.
So probably you will need to wait for next time ;)
Oh yes, One question to all following those stories:
Do you like them to be longer: start with softer stuff, then progress slowly until it gets to the blood and death.
Or jump to the end almost immediately without much of foreplay :)
Or maybe you prefer it without any story or reasoning at all. Just random stuff like those bunny suicides
I'm all for the jumping straight (or almost) into the gorey parts.
And having a story and progression makes it a lot more fun.
I'd say there should be balance. Not too long and not too short. Though if I had to choose between the two, I think I would prefer too short over too long. What for the longer stories, they shouldn't just take forever to get to anything fun, but instead start with something fun and progress to more fun.
I tend to like either long stories where we get to know the characters, learn the context etc or single panel/ultra short ones that are basically like jokes :-)
I prefer that there are stories with built-up to a climax point instead of just "action screenshots".
So: continue with your current style, it's perfect
Not sure where else to post it so let it go here
A little more Halloween themed pictures related to the one well known game too
I wonder if anyone can recognize it
Very cute trio!
I don't know enough games to guess! Sorry!
Don't worry about that.
I made than first and only then it came to my mind that they can somewhat represent certain game characters ;)
Although with the last picture it is pretty easy to find out even if you don't know it ;)
I certainly hope I'd be sober enough to realize I needed to steer clear of this kid and any of her "friends." Nice Halloween pics, Onix.
What's the dark thing in the kitchen knife girl's left hand?
They are pretty good, because everyone just craps their pants and leaves all candy. That's whey she collected so much ;) LOL
Huh? Left hand?
She only has a knife, nothing more.
I hope it is visible enuogh that she is floating in the air ;)
I can think of worse ways to go! lol
Didn't tell she's floating till you told me that lol
Could be the shadow too transparent?
It the the first time I tried to render a half transparent ghost and it seems to have some issues
Not really, Onix. I knew she was a floating, partially transparent ghost immediately. Nice job on the pic!
I believe the question was about this picture: >>34518
The girl on the right has a knife in her right hand and a teddy bear in her left hand.
I thought that was a baked sweet potato or something lol
Oops, I misunderstood the question.
yes that girl is holding a Teddy bear and she is not floating
It's ok,we all misunderstood sometimes xddd
So a new story.
This time it is a little diffrent than before.
( ° ʖ °) how much different will it be?
Not that much different
I don't want to spoil everything so lets say that this time it will be a little bit less consensual ;)
Sooner or later in these stories, that boy needs to realize his girlfriend is a crazy whack-job. Ha!
I think you already know where it is going>>34807
Yes that's a known problems it is fun to have crazy wack job girlfriend but also dangerous ;)
Hmmm. She's making a very bad career move there. Thanks for the continuing chuckles, Onix!
I thought her choker was duct tape and wondered if it was the same girl from the last story put back together lol
Interesting interpretation. ;)
Nice to see that you're posting some new story. I would complain about "not finishing one project" from consumer perspective, but from a maker perspective i'm not a bit better (looking at my 500 unfinished projects).
Just keep on making those fine guro pictures! Do you have an archive available online where we could find those stories as well or are you only posting them here?
hehe, I wonder which of the unfinished projects you would like to see continued ;)
But also unfinished ones are more or less infinite so they can never be finished in principle.
Currently I decided to move towards shorter stories.
I have a pixiv page under same name, but not everything is posted there because of all those censorship isues I don't want to post pictures where genitalia gets too much focus.
and I do not trust pixiv, so I expect that someday i will get banned for not censoring properly ;)
So currently gurochan has the most complete collection of my works, but there are few unpublished ones
Is there censoring on Pixiv? I've seen all sorts of crazy stuff there.
You are supposed to censor genitalia according to their rules
Usually, nobody notices but your pictures can be deleted anytime.
> hehe, I wonder which of the unfinished projects you would like to see continued ;)
Simple: All of them! I'm just happy when you post some new parts
Please continue this
Finally few more pictures. It is about the half of all story should be easy to guess where it is all going.
Got back to this project for a little
Now I have entire infinity of them ongoing at the same time LOL
It's been half of this story and still no nudity,come on my dear Onix :v
I hope it will not disappoint you too much but this story will be almost without nudity.
You already seen those characters nude enuogh of times ;)
jajajajaja poor Onix, we all love you XDDD
It doesn't matter if you drown us in nudity my dude,just continue your creative steps!
I had the same thought - not exactly a lot of mystery there any more! I more enjoy the goofy stories!
Yes, but we love to see these two nude. Can't get enough of them.
Send nudes? :v
You don't get the essence of Onix's work.
You talk like an adolescent.
Ok, so some more of the story.
I guess nobody expected it to go this way LOL
That was indeed unexpected and I love it!
Nice turn of events, bravo Onix! The boy has now the occasion to peel off the clothes of she-devil and fuck her with his finger. Or he could play with her in other ways.
it was already in the simpsons or griffins
Wait… so… it's the same boy but different girl each time? Same girl re-spawned somehow? Devil-girl accidentally lets slip her knowledge of the multiverse? I'd assumed these were like Trine & Christine stories where each story was a do-over?
She's just breaking the 4th wall, I think.
Now guro takes place even in angel and devil cliche,ground breaking my man
Yes, the story is like Trine & Christine but not quite. It is more like "Higurashi When They Cry" because regardless of do-overs some character development should happen. It would be a waste to make many stories without some global plot, but I am not completely sure about that plot myself ;)
The devil girl is actually explaining it to the readers who still don't get what it is all about ;)
her speech should be vague enough to raise suspicion but not enough to explain everything ;)>>35172
I deliberately left quite a lot of room for interpretation so that at the end of those series everything could make some sense ;)>>35179
Technically it is not really Angel and Demon but his conscience ;)
As you see he is not surprised at all by seeing them.
It will be fun to see what the "answer" is if you ever reveal it (or work it out for yourself!) My only question is why do they look like her rather than him? Or is it because he sees her as a bad influence?(USER WAS BANNED FOR THIS POST)
1 "conscience" is female-gendered word.
2 I do not have proper clothes for boys.
3 girls have more ways to persuade a boy.
4 it may be related to that "answer"
1. I don't think it works that way in modern day English. Though in French and Latin, where the English word originates from, it is female indeed.
Hey Onix I know this isn't lit, but do you know what happened to Edward Hyde and his stuff. It seems to deleted or banned?
You may be right about English but most of us here are not native English speakers so I guess we assign gender to English words too. ;)
Also, It may work in English too, because names are usually specific to men and women and that creates a certain intuitive feeling about what gender should be assigned to some word just like you would assign it to the unknown name.
Now I think again about the idea why those angels and demons in most of the other movies look like the character itself as look like in those situations they are good and evil thoughts of that same character while I treat conscience as a separate entity which is not really very nice, nagging you and you have to deal with it somehow :)
You will soon see what I have in mind ;)
I have no contact with Edward, and thus I can't really give acurate information. From his own words he deleted his stuff to prevent himself from being pulled back.
He did not reveal his reasons for leaving very clearly. I suppose it was because he was wasting too much time on his stories but there can be other reasons too especially considering his strange behavior on the last day when he made a request for his stories to be deleted he stopped responding entirely and ignored everyone.
His stuff didn't really fit here anyway lol. Plus he wrote way too quickly - we sure he wasn't a group of people? Or just nicking the stories from somewhere else? Too bad he nicked crap ones if that's the case!>>35208
Yeah that's why I questioned it but your explanation about having more girl costumes made sense! Maybe two boys can show up too and get it on with them?
I think you are requesting a version of "inside out" movie LOL
Ah man this is jolly creative,having two guro storyline at the same time!
This is brilliant! Definitely keeping me entertained!
This update was fantastic. The personifications of the boy's good and evil conscience fighting it out for influence. Great stuff, Onix! Very entertaining.
Nice too see that you liked.
Creative and joyful, Onix forever!
So there is the end. For now..
I had some big plans for a new year, sort of the summary of certain stories but I did not manage to finish them all so plans are going to shrink a bit :)
Also now there is a question, which of my threads should I continue next?
Still wonder what does 'give a head' mean in English, and I guess this time it's 'give an eye'?
Swimming pool suicide I pressumed? Casual scucide stuff is most recent, so it should be easier to pick up or add some more 'accident' into this universe.
Like: traffic accident, fatal sports,or even some 'team death match' gun fight of some tween children would be jolly great to present the skill of you making the girl(s) more living.
On the other hand, casual suicide might suit your style better,your capabilities on presenting the girl's daily habits are insanely good,while you can present the girl's habits and extend the depth of them,instead of just bunch of people came out of nowhere poking themselfs.
You may really born to produce this kind of series,I'll always giving bump whatever you make ;)
Everytime I can't get one word to describe something I have to replace it with extra words, English 2 hard 4 me m8
Giving head = giving a blow-job. She added the "a", I assume, for a joke!
That was certainly "one in the eye" for her! (Old-fashioned expression meaning embarassing defeat, similar to "getting one over" on someone!)
Another step on learning English, thanks a lot! ;)
All your works are awesome! Thank you very much. I like your Cultural torture festival the most of all. Please, please, please continue that series. It's so exciting for me:)
Thank you for your wonderful and creative ideas, Onix. But it's been a long time without looking at your splendid work. A bit more of it, please!
I second that!
Nice to see that you still like me :)
But I was not really asleep :) In that time, I made over 100 pictures and a new series, new characters. Just this time a different type of "guro" LOL or no guro at all so I did not post them here
Another cute character, wherever she is posted. Thanks for the peek!
So where DID you post this series? Work of your quality deserves views!
I post them on pixiv where all finished series end, and gurochan gets everything more or less in the real time as it is being made ;)https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/10029883
picture is not yet posted anywhere else, as it is from currently unfinished episode
Will we be seeing more from you? Your stories appeal to my dark sense of humor :)
Well at this time I am doing something different than guro.
Maybe it would be more fit on /S board LOL
but if people want it here I dont mind to post it here too.
Cannot say yet when next guro story will come out.
S is great!
S+G would be more great. I hope for the best in future.