I'm finally back with you. You're gorgeous!!! Great work!!!!!
Ah what a shame the long haired girl wasnt popular. Shes really cute. Id love to buy her and have her locked up in my basement as my rape toy :)
Oh well, will be fun seeing her executed
Fantastic, even better! Thank you again!
Love your work!
Could you make one boyish looking girl in one of the next sets/stories?
Hi Serge, nice to see you've found your way to the new gurochan.
I'm not quite sure what you mean by boyish. Woul done of these two fit your definition? They are both in the summer camp, but their scenes are probably still months away.
The last post was a reply to >>28430
Here's some more CDL.
Great update, i just love to see Darla suffer!
Rather no, I meant a more "radical" haircut espesially.
But they are cute too
Lovely how Darla is whipped!
Nice short story! I'm not the biggest fan of hangings, but that was pretty enjoyable.
Completely unrelated: I noticed you have never really used any gags. I've seen some unusual gags once or twice, but i don't think i have ever seen a simple ball gag in any of your stories. That's something that could be used in many different situations to enhance the fear and torture for some girls, if there is no reason to keep their mouths open and accessible. I've also never seen you use any blindfolds, i'm sure there are situations where those could be used to increase their fear some more.
For a few more complicated ideas: As execution methods, i don't think you have done a crucification yet. There is lots of that on other sites, but always with older women, i can't recall ever seeing a loli crucified. Something even more rare would be breaking a girl on the wheel, there is at least one thread here with some pictures, but again nothing with lolis. And finally, what i haven't seen anybody do yet in 3d even with older victims would be skinning a girl alive. That might be too hard to do, so i'm not really expecting that to happen, but i just wanted to throw out all of those ideas.
Again, the disposed girls story is not actually finished yet.
You have some good suggestions. Actually I think I will have to use blindfolds and gags a lot in the Summer Camp, at least at the beginning.
I also already have planned a crucifixion for that story.
Breaking a girl at the wheel might be hard though. I've seen that done by Quoom but I don't know yet how I could emulate it. But there might be at least some breaking coming up.
But skinning a girl is beyond my skills at the moment I am afraid. I have encountered some pictures of skinnings in 3D but they all look very sterile and unerotic. This is really something that 2D artists can do a lot better I think.
what a wonderful pic, the dynamism of a man whipping a girl is clearly visible, her struggle to escape the whip, the inevitability of the instrument finding her youthful skin, breaking it, making her scream in pain. You surpassed yourself again Drabok!
I'm looking forward to all of that!
I have seen that set from Quoom. I don't think i have seen it done by anybody else, so it might indeed be pretty complicated. About the skinning, i have seen one set where the girl's body was displayed after she was skinned, and that didn't look very good to me. I haven't seen the process of skinning a living girl yet, i have seen one or two pics by Quoom, so maybe something is out there, but so far nothing has leaked as far as i know. But i wasn't really expecting that to happen, just thought i might as well bring it up with my other ideas.
I love what's happening to Darla and Laura right now, those are some really nice whipping scenes!
Thank you Anonymice >>28551
. And for the latter: Yeah, I am kind of proud about that pic too for the same reasons. Nice for someone to recognize that.
That said maybe you could use some kine of pseudonym? Would make it easier to tell comments apart and answer them individually. I don't think that would detract from your anonymity here on gurochan.cx, especially if you use either tor browser or a trustworthy VPN Provider to access it.
It's really not easy to do a good whipping in 3D, capturing motion, emotion and marks at the same time and not all my pictures have the same quality.
And just a thought for everybody else: More comments for me would often mean more motivation to do more work. I think that would be true for other artists posting work here for free and without any thoughts about steering people to patreon or some other means of getting money from it too.
Doesn't all have to be positive either.
For instance somebody could have said: "But Drabok, Darla's whipping looks good. But those marks on her are somehow wrong. Maybe … too red?"
And then I might have answered: "Yes! You are absolutely right! I am using a new version of the gimp to do these textures and I have not really gotten how it handles colors yet. It's different from the old version I used before and I can't figure out how to get back to that."
And then somebody might even come up with a tip.
Maybe I will start to criticize my own work here routinely because I am probably my own hardest critic.
And then others could come in and hate me for trying to drive an artist (artists are known to be very intolerant of criticism!) away from gurochan. Luckily I am not an artist, I am a sadistic pornographer.
And then others again could come in and applaud Drabok for trying to drive away that fucker Drabok who always disappoints requests or only fulfills them months later!
And then even more others…
Damn, a nice fantasy, but probably won't happen.
LOL. LOL. LOL! I'm mostly a lurker but I will try to comment more on your despicable pics! LOL!
Ok, i guess i'll use a pseudonym from now on.
I was lurking in this thread for almost a year, until old gurochan lost its clearnet site and i realized if nobody else commented you wouldn't post anything new any more, and your stuff is so good and so perfectly fits my taste i really didn't want that to happen. And then after a while i realized i could actually give you some ideas.
The thing with criticism is: Most artists don't take that very well. And i really don't like to criticize stuff when i can't do it any better myself. So i usually focus on the story and try to give you some of my own ideas what you could do, but i can't go into the technical details how to do that.
About the whipping scene: That last picture looks indeed very good, and i think it's the best you have done so far for a whipping scene. I already liked your first whipping scene with Sabrina, but this is clearly a major improvement.
I like how much work you put into having these visible marks on the girls, you can see what already happened to them, and overall it looks really good and realistic (and yes, as you mention it, those marks on Darla might be a little bit too red). Most 3d artists don't do that stuff, probably because it's a lot of work. And you can clearly see the pain and desperation in the girls faces, that's something else you usually do very well.
Most of the time i could criticize something, it's not about the pictures and more about how much i like the stories, for example how i'm not a huge fan of hangings and how i very much prefer long torture scenes over quick snuff scenes. But that's all personal preference, others might prefer other stuff.
On other forums you can even get banned for any kind of criticism, so everyone is trained that either it is some kind of praise or silence.
Anyway, your works are pretty much perfect to the level as they can be so nothing much to criticize. Maybe you should deliberately make something crappy to get more attention? LOL and maybe you do not really need to bother with the perfection that much but make more pictures instead.
But one thing which I don't like is your facial expressions, you kinda try to exaggerate them but they do not look that good. I Think I already mentioned that some time ago but you did not find any better solutions. In the laters pictures girls have very thick lips when they open their mouths.
also since you mentioned to use gimp for texture editing I can recommend you to try iray decals instead. That way it will be much easier and better quality because you can make wounds swell a bit
Drabok might I ask where did you get the cane and other instruments found in your pic ? I do wish to dabble in to 3D pics for some time now . Related subjects to your pic , the latest hanging pics were wonderfully done .
Also where and how may I also find the shape/body types for the say Darla & etc ? was there a sharing site someone or you mentioned ?
About those facial expressions Onix mentioned: I usually like them, and sometimes they are really good, but it's true, sometimes they can look a bit unnatural. When that happens, it's often when their mouths are wide open. It could be because their lips are very full indeed. I just tried to compare some recent pictures with some pictures from your Sabrina story, because i really liked all the facial expressions in that story, and her lips were much smaller, so maybe that could help with that.
Another simple solution to that problem would be to use gags, then you don't have to show their wide open mouths that much. This is what many artists do in their torture scenes.
Hi everybody and thanks for the comments.>>28598
Ganymed, I can only promise that my stories will always be mixed. Some have more, some have less torture, some have hangings but I'll try to also vary methods of execution. And even will have no death. I guess.>>28605
Precia: There's a guy on deviantart who offers some nifty bdsm tools: https://www.deviantart.com/noone102000/gallery/60841107/Freebies-and-Tutorials
Other than that renderotica.com is the main source for kinky stuff. Of course it's not for free. There are ways to get stuff without paying, but I won't point them out directly, because i'm actually in favor of paying the people who put their work into making useful models. But if you buy everything I know the hobby could get pretty expensive. So I'll just say this: Google
For bodys and faces like darla: There is a morph set called "growing up" by zev0 that I mostly use to make adult models younger. There are also ready made young girls, the best by somebody called angelwings.
And Onix and Ganymed, about the faces: Yes, the g3 models often have fuller lips than the old victoria 4. And the lips can get exaggerated by some expressions. Maybe I should try to reduce lip size when I use those expressions.
I'll have to try that trick out soon.
I did not notice that myself but daz really has some problems with lip thickness and it is not limited to G3, G8 have similar problems so your idea to reduce thickness using extra morph is worth trying. It will be useful for me as well.
But another problem is mouth and lip shape, as they are not only to thick but also the center is sticking out too much while corners are pushed in. When the mouth opens it looks pretty unnatural, since wide open mouth is supposed to be very smooth
for example in this picture >>28533
, mouth is very irregular for some reason and looks like it is totally loose
It is unclear why many of your girls have kinda "pouty" lips like that that do not open properly
Don't worry I love hangings, as I've said previously. Younger the better. Bet many others here do too. Great thing with your work - something for everybody. Much thanks.
Oh, I can't get enough of these. And I love the body piles as well.
Love the Carla, Darla and Laura series, do you post anywhere else if Gurochan does not endure?
Hi Onix >>28600
I think the problem with my pouty lips is, that I tend to fall for original adult characters who have that feature. And then making them younger tends to exaggerate it even more. I will watch out for that more in the future.
As to using decals for marks: I have only discovered the recently. I have used the them for some blood effects on flat surfaces and for blood bubbling out of a mouth, because with the decal there's no problem with the texture boundary between head and torso. But I think they coundnt be used for a mark that's wrapping around a round body. And because they are projections they are not staying really in place when I put a body into a different pose.
I am currently posting my pics on pixiv too /same nickname as here) and I would continue there if gurochan.cx went down too.
Two alternative views for souro >>28035
I did not manage to make her pussy glisten though. Although that would also not be quite fitting the situation I think.
Those darts might cost the guys. That's indeed a start to an escape. I hope there will still be more torture, at least for the other two girls, but maybe things won't work out for Carla as well and she has to suffer some more before she gets a chance to fight back.
scene when Laura heroically righted her own broken fingers a lot. And the last scene with Carla: The emotions and how you show them in the pictures and tell them in the captions are just perfect. Amazing.
Sorry, some thing went wrong with that last post. Here's the full post:
I know that most people here get off on the torture scenes. But I already admired the scene where Laura heroically righted her own broken fingers a lot. And the last scene with Carla: The emotions and how you show them in the pictures and tell them in the captions are just perfect. Amazing.
But I actually also found something to criticize: The dart in that last picture is poking through her hand.
Finally story starts to get interesting by itself.
I really wanna see how she will manage to fight those guys using darts as weapons. Maybe poke someone in the eye?
By the way, pulling darts out is just as good as good as pushing then in ;)
Hi Bobuzi. Are you still posting my pics to lolicit? On close inspection the dart actually does not poke through her hand, but she does have a very strange position of her hand. Maybe I'll correct that for the next CDL post.
I have to admit that besides CDL I also worked a bit more on the summer camp story after I've changed my plans to have a more torture in it before the girls are executed.
Part of that was reducing the number of girls further, so I had to redo some of the introduction pics.
So here's a restart of the whole thing with an actual front page.
I like how you're doing the presentation of the girls now! And i like that we got some more background for some of the girls with additional relationships.
And i really love the idea to have us vote on our favorites so you can grant some requests! I'll wait with that until tomorrow when you have shown us all the girls. Meanwhile i'm trying to make a ranking for the girls, this is a really great selection so far.
Maybe shoot the black girl in the pussy?
I vote for Tasha, Iris and Cathy. In terms of torture, my ideal would be to stick all three through a wooden wall, next to each other, their upper bodies one side, the lower body on the other. Two of them on their backs, their legs pulled up and ankles stretched wide and attached to the wall (ropes, chains), the other girl standing on her feet, bend over, her ass sticking out of the wall, her feet chained to the ground. On the other side of the wall the girls would be free to move their hands, which would not help them much to allay the attack on their asses and pussies. In terms of torture, outsized insertions would be a good starter, after which a flogging from hell would reduce their pussies to a bloody mess.
Am really looking forward to some creative and painful tortures in this most interesting new setting Drabok!
I like Devon, waterboarding with the other girls pissing on her for it! While the men take turns breaking her in. Piercing her nipples then corset piercing down her chest and tummy. her clit and cunt lips. pulled tight. Then an ice bath to clean her up a bit and to warm her up again her sisters fuck her ass and cunt. Tie her down with barbed wire so she won`t even try to squirm away. The sisters should get encouraged by whippings. Of course all of it is filmed. And then send to rich men all over the world with an invite to bid on her. The next day or the day after, have some of the men complain that the offers they get for her are not even covering her food cost so she becomes food for the other girls. As you excluded gutting and skinning I`d suggest an oven roast or a stew for her!
How 'bout something fun and simple for hut no.2?
It's a camp, and a camp needs cooking events. After making sure to keep the heads safe and pretty (no one wants them to suffocate) boil Moira alive in a glass tank, fry Devon next to her, feed them to the group - their sister first and foremost before giving her an enema and douche of boiling oil and water from her sisters' executions. Perhaps first take a syringe and drip boiling oil onto all sorts of sensitive spots - clitty, nipplies, eyes? Force some up her nose, some inside the mouth. The sisters probably should be prepared for the cooking properly as well. Complete deboning is not really in the books - but I'm sure you could remove those pesky teeth and nails. Spicy cuisine is the word of the day - cover them in habanero sauce, with extra attention to the insides and freshly-sensitive nailbeds.
Maybe also something artsy? You know how they make aluminum casts of ant nests? Take Jinn and a fire colony. First of course she needs to understand how it feels to be an ant nest, so smear her crotch all over with honey. Take a couple wire mesh dildos and dip them in sweet water before sticking them deep in, then tie her spread next to the nest before angering its inhabitants. Give them a couple hours to get acquainted, perhaps stirring the ants every now and then to keep them active. Afterwards tie her upside down, legs spread as far as possible. Melt some aluminum, and first pour it down the nest she kept entertained until now to cast it and show her the results. Next, do the same with her cunny and arse - of course without the dildos that had kept her spread for the insects earlier, after all we want a cast of her insides.
Great selection of girls! I could probably make a favorite list with half the girls in it, but i'll try to limit myself at least a bit.
Biggest favorite for me is Lyla. She just looks so innocent and shy, yet so very beautiful, perfect to completely destroy her. I would love to see you cutting her away piece by piece, start small with some nails, then go on to fingers and toes, maybe her nipples, gouge out an eye or eventually both, take out her teeth, eventually cut of her arms and legs - i prefer her to get tortured until she dies, instead of tortured and then executed. And leading up to all of that, i really want to see her gagged with a ball gag, i hope to see that with many girls, but her in particular. And i certainly wouldn't mind some additional less serious torture to get her started, maybe some needle torture, there are so many ways to use those things.
For the next girls it's getting really close. Iris is looking great, souro already claimed her, his suggestions are fine for me, just make it a slow and painful death. Latisha is also looking great, just like Iris she is a little fire cracker. And i could see her getting some of that fire back, there are many ways to use hot coals. Force her in a position over hot coals, burn out her pussy and ass with a hot poker, burn out her eyes, eventually cook her alive in boiling water - or put some boiling water into her to cook her from the inside. Since there are already multiple suggestions for cooking girls, maybe we want something different for her. I don't know if burning at the stake is possible, but that would be another way to end her. I wouldn't mind using her along with her sister in some way, she's just my favorite among those two.
My other favorites are Celine, Gwen and Nina. I'd love to see some broken bones. I mentioned breaking on the wheel a few posts ago, since that might be too complicated it would be fine to just get close to that - my favorite for that would be Celine. I'd like to see a crucification. Another thing i'd like to see would be a girl tortured on a wooden horse (those torture devices, not an actual horse). Just in general i like to see creative and very painful tortures and i'm not into quick deaths, but we already established that. And i like to see some gags and maybe blindfolds on some of the girls leading up to and at the start of the torture.
I can make the game for you
Incredible updates, Drabok. I love them all.
I think you could do some eye-fucking and brain fucking. Also, givr one of them a hot sauce enema and force a massive dildo up her ass. That will hurt like a motherfucker
I have so many ideas, so i'll try to share some of them.
Let's start with Lorin. She seems like a shy and quiet girl, let's keep it that way and keep her gagged from start to finish, the idea of a girl not having a chance to say anything during her whole ordeal really turns me on. What to do with her? Chain her above ground to the wall, so she hangs at the wall in a spread eagle position, or you could even nail her to the wall. In that position, stick some needles into her body and give her some nipple clamps, heat up some of those needles for more pain. There's a metal bar horizontally stuck to the wall just under her pussy, so her pussy has to rest on it. You could stick some staples on that. Screw a metal dildo into the bar, with some spikes so she has some more fun, something for her ass too. Connect that with some wires for some electro torture, you could set it up so she gets shocked every minute, some wires for her tits too, that would work great with those nipple clamps. And then slowly heat it all up, so her pussy and guts get cooked! From there you could just leave her like that and wait how long she lasts, unless you have a better idea to finish her off.
Another girl i really like is Rica. Beat her to death! Just tie her up in an interesting position hanging from the ceiling, whip her for a while or do some other stuff to warm her up, rape her, and then use her as a punching bag. Under all those hits she gets more and more bruises, some of her teeth get knocked out and her eyes start swelling shut. Take breaks to rape her some more. Then turn to some brass knuckles for the beating so her injuries get even more serious. And then turn to a baseball bat, just take your time with her so she has to suffer many hits, before she dies stick the baseball bat into her cunt as deep as possible. Added bonus would be if the baseball bat is covered in barbed wire. No gags needed for that one, i'd like to see her scream and beg.
With no particular girl in mind, some other ideas:
Psychological torture. Either with two girls, letting one of them choose what's going to happen to the other, of course between two horrible options, then switch their roles - and make sure there is no communication between the girls and they don't know what options the other one had to choose from, so after a while they turn on each other and start choosing the more painful option. Or with just one girl, you could start something slow but lethal like tying her up over some hot coals, and she can always stop that for a while, but then she get's tortured in another way. And make her options worse every time, until you don't really give her a choice any more.
For a hanging scene that isn't just more of the same: To draw it out a little longer, instead of just hanging her, you could put a girl on the gallows, give her a good whipping and rape her while she already has a noose around her neck, then pull her up and let her hang for a while and just before she dies let her down again and rape and torture her some more, do it once or twice until the guys get bored of her and finally let her hang until she dies.
That's all for now.
I love the idea of a silent girl. Maybe shove a dildo gag so she is forced to deepthroat it forever, obviously the dildo would need to have a tiny hole for her breathing, but the dildo will be so deep in her throat that her vocal chords are obstructed.
Another idea I got is a "board game", where the objective is to get to the finish and it is played with 2 6 sided dice. However every space has a torture, and I can list a few:
2. Electric shocks
5. Impaling themselves in massive dildos (some of them have barbed wire of nails poking out of them)
8. Bras and panties with super cooled ice
11. Having to use ballet heels for the entire duration of the game (or until they die)
12. Nail removal
13. Eating rotten things
15. Using anal hooks
The board has 50 spaces, with the first space being free of torture and the last space having a small "congratulatory beating" for beating the game.
The first one to reach the finish space will be rewarded with a meal, however every advanced space comes with the torture. For example, if a girl rolls a 9, that means she advances 9 spaces, but she must endure 9 tortures.
Also, there is a catch. The game is winnable of course, but the last 10 spaces (in addition to their tortures) are labeled with "return to start", so the girl must return to the first space and make her way again. So, if she lands on space number 38 and 39, she needs to score a 12 or a 11 to win, else she will be sent to the forst space.
I hope this makes sense
I’d like to see at least one of the girls Lon the gillotine if possible.
I see that people are giving cool sounding requests without much of thought on how to actually do them in 3D LOL
So I will add some, what should be very easy to do.
1 "dynamite dildo" where a girl gets something explosive stuffed in her butt and then it goes bang leaving just upper torso and legs ;)
2. almost beaten to death trope where girl may be somehow locked and required to cut off her own hand or leg or just a nipple or finger to escape. Alternatively, girls can be given the option to commit suicide to avoid an extremely painful death
3 considering cooking, I think before girls notice anything suspicious one of them may disappear, and her meat could be given to other girls to cook and eat later revealing to them what it was. this is practically only text and maybe later show the dismembered corpse of one or 2 girls.
As my personal preference, I would suggest more scenes with girls torturing each other like for example hanging then on the one rope so that both need to stand on their toes and if one gets tired they both sufflocate.
or put a meathook in one girl's breast and let another girl hold and hang on it so that if she releases it she dies.
also, girls could be nailed to the trees but not get killed immediately only left there until other girls find them
one way to do it is to use big blunt nails to skewer her body in the belly and other relatively nonvital areas so that she does not die immediately but it is prety hard to get free.
Of cuorse, I have no clue if any of that can fit your story but at least it is pretty easy to do.
I spent some more time thinking about my ideas and changing and polishing some more details:
The plan for Lyla: Have her gagged with a ball gag at the start. Start out with some rape, have her tied with spread legs and arms on a table. Then go on to some needle torture, put some under her finger nails and then focus on her tits and clit. Now you finally remove her gag and get to work on her teeth, take out all her teeth! If somebody wants to fuck a girl in a teethless mouth, now is the time. Then gouge out an eye, stick it into one of the needles in her tits, leave the other eye for now. Maybe you could rip out her tongue, just have to make sure the blood loss isn't killing her, if you do stick that onto one of those needles too. Then it's time to amputate her arms and legs, maybe with a chainsaw to make it clean and fast. Either cauterize the wounds or give her some bandages, so she doesn't bleed out that fast. Now it's finally time to take out her last eye, stick that on another needle in her tits. Then put her upright on a huge metal dildo, put the gag back into her mouth so she is quiet, and just leave her there as a room decoration. When the next girl is brought into the room, she is still alive, to increase the horror in that girl. Eventually she dies from her injuries and is left as a dead room decoration. While it's probably not easy, i think this should be possible to do.
The plan for Latisha isn't that concrete. I kinda want her sister and maybe even her cousin involved. Since souro claimed Iris, she could just have to watch it and maybe get a taste with some brandings if she protests, until she gets taken away for her own torture. Lilly should do more than just watch it, maybe you start with both of them, but for some reason the torturer focusses on Latisha, maybe she gets cheeky, she looks like a girl who could throw some insults at her torturer, and so she gets tortured more than her sister. I want to see good use on some hot irons all over her body, and i want to see those used in her ass and pussy, and also to burn out both of her eyes, maybe just like with Lyla start with one eye somewhere in the middle and save the last one until close to the end. Instead of hot irons, you could also use a welding torch for some of it, cigarettes could do some work too, and maybe even some simple candles. Candles or hot coals in the right position under her body could also make things more uncomfortable over time, maybe you could at some point just tie up her sister in a position over candles or hot coals and then focus the more active torture on Latisha, or maybe shift around between those two for a bit. I don't think her tits are big enough for some real tit torture, but that could work with her sister. You could tie Latisha into an upside down position and force some boiling water down her pussy - that should be lethal, but wouldn't kill her just yet. Not sure what more to do, boiling alive might be too hard, burning at the stake is almost certainly not possible the more i think about it. I hope everything else should be possible.
Celine should end up with lots of broken bones and her broken arms and legs twisted in some unnatural positions, ideally on the wheel, but just make whatever comes close to that and is possible for you to do.
Gwen would be my favorite to torture on a wooden horse. That should probably have a spiked dildo in the middle, to make it even more uncomfortable to sit on it. There are all sorts of things you could do to her while she's sitting there, i'll leave that to you. I'm not sure how to make that lethal, the only idea i have is to heat up the dildo inside of her and cook her from the inside, but something similar was requested a bunch of times already. She is also a girl i would like to see gagged at some point.
That would make Nina the one to get crucified, looks good to me. There are a bunch of things you can do to her while she is hanging on the cross, i'm sure you have some good ideas.
All of that should be possible.
Going over some suggestions others have made:
I like souros suggestions, seems fine to me.
I like most of LadyCaths ideas (i'm not into pissing, but waterboarding in general seems fine). I love Estas ideas, since both posters have ideas for Devon and her sisters, maybe it's possible to combine them and start with waterboarding, then move on to the cooking event - just not sure how much of that is actually possible to do. I especially love the suggestion for Jinn, just don't know how much of that is doable, but it combines two of my most fucked up fantasies, one with ants and one with pouring molten metal into a girl. I have seen Krogue do some good looking work with ants on lolicit, up to that point i didn't think i would ever see that, so it might be possible. The aluminum cast might be impossible to do, but just pouring molten metal into her pussy should work, at least i hope so.
I like the ideas from Killerfox, especially the one for Lorin, the idea for Rica sounds hot too. And i might like a hanging scene like that, at least i'll like it more than a simple hanging.
Magali's idea to play with some hot sauce sounds fun to me. For the eye fucking you need to get rid of the eyes first, and that's always a great idea. The board game seems like a nice idea, but i think it would take way too long, that alone looks like it would take a few hundred pictures.
Let 3 escape so you can go hunting with the dogs.
Would suggest the younger girls from hut number two to be chained to a device and cooked alive. I am getting this idea from Lilheart on Lolicit, look up Gurotube for an idea of what I am talking about. Great work btw
Holy shit GC is back and my favourite thread is still going, now on it's fourth incarnation.
I have been loving the CDL story every second, the random killings of young "criminal" girls is just astounding and the promise of a reality show where the girls will be killed is fucking awesome.
I see that you need some ideas, and I have one idea for youv(since cooking has been mentioned already).
Make an ice horse. You know, like the wooden horse torture device, but with ice.
Maybe tie the girl and make her sit on the sharp icy edge. Her body temperature will start to melt the ice, however frostbite will happen earlier than the ice completely melts. If you want to increase the torture, you can take the girl for a 2 minute rest while she recovers a bit and then put her back.
Also, I think a huge dildo inside the ice (so when it melts to a certain point, the dildo starts to penetrate her) would be awesome. I dunno if that is possible though.
After already getting so many and often very elaborate ideas for the summer camp I have to not close but at least narrow down the voting. Trying to fulfill some wished I will kind of go on a first come first serve basis.
But there's good news and bad news. First the bad. IN order to fulfill these ideas even partly I will have to invest much more time into some girls fate than I planned. And because I still want to finish in some reasonable amount of time like 10 years or so (joke) some other girls have to drop out of the story rather quickly, one way or another.
So out of the "race" are: : Caley, Aurora, Nastyusha, Kayla, Asako, Rikku, Darnissa, Georgia and Mika.
And Jinn, because I actually accidentally deleted her character from my runtime.
In the future there might be more quick drop outs.
And now the good news.
Still at your disposal for the moment, because I as zhe main judge have saved them personally for now, are Fe, Lacie, Myu, Molly, Laurie and Julieta.
Others I have already given to some of the commenters:
(But those who don't want spoilers should better not read on.)
For the sisters Eliza, Moira and Devon, I will try to go along the lines of Esta's and Lady Cath's suggestions. Although I have no idea yet if I can pull off a cooking.
For Lyla and Latisha I'll go in the direction of Ganymeds ideas.
Lorin and Rica now *belong" to Killerfox.
Kensey will get shot in the pussy like Pussy shooter suggested and Tasha, Iris and Cathy will have a stint in a glory hole wall like souro wants. But all of these tortures are quite survivable so there might be further suggestions.
I will of course also try to incorporate other ideas that have been suggested without any specific girl mentioned.
I was expecting worse news, since we kinda went all out with our requests, so overall this is awesome to hear, and i'm happy my main ideas seem to work out! We'll see how it goes, i guess it will take a while before we see the first action pictures for this story.
I'm only sad you lost Jinn, not as much because of the girl (i liked her, but she wasn't in my top 10), more because i loved Esta's ideas for her. Is something close to this ant nest scenario still possible, or is it just too complicated to do? If it is, i would love to see it with another girl, but since this wasn't my idea i shouldn't be the one to decide about a replacement.
I could probably give you ideas for some of those girls still in the race. But i already voted for so many girls and made so many suggestions, it feels more than a little greedy to do that right now.
I just hope the girls will more of the hot iron treatment esp on their sensitive areas , there was a few scene before that never got a full scene I think .
Caley, Rikku, and Asaku are my favorites, perhaps another story featuring them.
The 9 throwaways could escape and be rounded up, with a group hanging to set an example.
Great way to start the story.
Some more general information and some specific answers.
First: how do I decide which requests I will try out? Well, first, my very own cock decides how sexy he finds an idea. And then I divide this by how much work it will probably cause or how difficult it is.
All of you to whom I promised some specific tortures: First I can only do a part of what you suggested. And you will have to wait for probably some months until you see your ideas realized. For now I will continue to work mostly on the CDL story. And then I'm afraid I had already made quite a few scenes for the girls in huts 3 an 4 (which I have not shown you yet) and if I don't want to change all those again those events will have to come before I get to the other girls.
Some other answers >>28765
No, I will not make a return scene for them. But I have other similar and in my opinion cuter characters for future stories.>>28752
Bender, the melting ice horse is a nice idea but too difficult for me.>>28724
Magali: A lot of that will be in the summer camp. But not as a board game. That's too complicated.
And finally Esta, >>28709
The ants are out because my cock does not fancy the idea. He has peculiar tastes. Liquid metal poured into orifices: Maybe, but difficult. I'll try.
I'm patient, and i'm certainly curious for the rest of the CDL story, and also for what you have already done for LSC.
I'm taking the way you make your decisions what to do as invitation to post more ideas, just that i should probably not make my ideas too complicated or long. Anyway, here are some more ideas, at least one full scene and a few more smaller bits:
Have a girl hung upside down with her legs spread over a water tank, hands tied together but hanging down in the water. She has to make an effort to raise her head above water, she is struggling for air through the whole scene. Then get to work on her pussy, pussy whipping in this position would be really sexy, but do whatever you like. Eventually the guys get bored of her, they put some weights on her hands. This way she can't raise her head above water any more and drowns. Maybe even start out with some smaller weights already, so she can't get her hands high enough to get in the way of her torture. Alternatively you could have her hands tied behind her back and instead of weights they hold her head down in the end.
Use some hooks and skewers to torture some titties. This needs a girl with slightly bigger tits, but there should be enough of those.
Nail some body parts to something else (trees, tables, wooden posts): Hands, feet, titties if they are big enough, maybe even a tongue.
You had some really nice torture devices in the CDL story, and even when you didn't, the girls were tied into some really nice positions. I'd like to see more of those sexy positions. One idea: An x-shaped cross, with the girl tied to it spread eagle. The same thing could also work upside down, the normal way it's easier to rape her pussy and torture her tits and face, upside down it's easier to rape her mouth and torture her pussy.
I want to see some blindfolded girls, i just can't come up with the right torture scene where that would be important, but it's sexy on its own - maybe it's useful to lead some of the girls to their tortures to get a nice reaction when they see what's waiting for them.
I didn't want to claim any more girls, but if nobody else votes for any girls: Among those still in the race, Fe is my favorite, it would be a shame not to give the only brown skinned girl some special attention, she has a great body. Maybe she could be on the x-shaped cross, i just want her tied in the right position to admire all of her body, there are many ways to torture her from there - maybe some tit torture, certainly rape. And to finish her off, strangulation could look good with that, i remember you wanted to do that and it wasn't suggested so far, it seems to fit for this scene and this girl. Julieta could work for the drowning and pussy torture scene i described.
Force some to perform on each other while watching the event.
I wonder if this your clever attempt to get more comments, but why did he use wooden hammer?
Those are some awesome pictures! Loved the nailing for Darla's ass, and it looks like i will like what's next for Laura even more. And just when i put in a request for blindfolds, it's there out of nowhere, that's great! You probably could have mentioned somewhere in the text why she is suddenly blindfolded, but i'm just going to assume it's for the same reason i like to see it: It's more fun when she can't see the iron coming and doesn't know where it will hit her next.
Well Onix, there are several reasons for that.
On one hand, after having been chemically castrated by his wife, Jacob does not feel very secure about his manliness. So he likes to use big phallic symbols.
On the other hand, despite his bulk, he does not really have a lot of muscle and the wooden hammer is much lighter than a big ass iron one.
And on the third hand, the big hammer made it easier to hide the fact that he is not exactly hitting those nails heads in these pictures for me.
Your porn is probably more complex than Shakespeare's hamlet :)
It is good to have artist alive to gets answers to such questions LOL
Artist like him are super rare XD
btw Drabok sir just scribbling down notes atm , after you done posing with the models do you just snap to camera save as png and that's it or do you run it via gimp later for touch up's ? ty if anyone else can answer that be helpful & appreciated too ~
I think I'm just good at bullshitting myself out of mistakes, times when I have to turn around a story because my original plans don't work out or things I do in my pics that I simply didn't think about. Like the wooden hammer.
Precia, you cannot just "snap" a camera. You have to render a picture in the 3D program, a process that takes usually ten to twenty minutes, but can also take hours depending on the picture.
But after that I use the gimp only to add text and convert to jpg and sometimes, but very seldom, correct some minor flaws.
Ooh man, Drabok. I really hope you're going do this art for a long long time. I love it. I'm very curios about the Summer camp. I know that this is going to be awesome ;)
Congrats on the anniversary drabok.
Love the final pic of the disposed girls. Plaving the head of one onto the others cunny, pure genious
Do you have more pictures with hanging chirdren girl?
Cannot wait to see Laura getting burned. I love watching her suffer
I love your work, grats to the anniversary, i hope you can keep it up for a long time. Those have been two years full of great content!
I have high hopes for the summer camp story too. If you are still taking requests, i have an idea for both Lacie and Molly: Two torturers play a little game with both girls. They each get a noose around their necks and have to balance on a shaky chair. If they fall, they hang. Then they both get whipped. The girl who loses her balance first hangs, they get told the other girl will survive. But really the winning girl only wins a different torture, now she gets burned with the hot iron until she loses her balance too.
Two years is about 23 months longer than many talented artists who share but have no real sense of conviction or perseverance. YOU.ARE.DA.MAN. Well, unless you're a woman. Either way you're appreciated. ;) Thank you!
2 years?! Whoa, that is a lot of time, I remember browsing /3dcg/ and then seeing Rose. From then I was hooked. Congratulations and thank you for the awesome renders you've made.
Thinking about a torture that I don't know if it's possible, however I will say it.
So, the girls are in a camp in the forest. There must be some source of water, maybe a shallow lake. Well, make some of the technicians or torturers install a chain link on the lakebed. Then announce a "competition".
The competition is to avoid death by drowning. The girls share a rope that passes through the underwater chain link. That same rope is tied around their necks. Also, the girls are kneeling on the lakebed, tied in place. Their hands and feet are tied too, so the must use only their torsos to avoid drowning. If one girl raises, the other one lowers. The water must be at their chin level when fully raised, so only one girl can "breathe" (remember, the rope will strangle her) without too much trouble. The winner is the one who doesn't drown. However, the winner will be asphyxiated by ramming a massive dildo in her throat untill she passes out and dies.
One more thing, that if this is kinda reality show I think one girl should win in the end and maybe even stay alive. Just to be left alone in the island so that she will die on her own LOL
Help! I have just reduced the number of girls that I want to devote more time to in the Last Summer Camp but with all the specific ideas floating around I would probably need more girls. I really can only say that I'll see what I can do.
Just two specific answers: >>28874
Magali, Some of your previous suggestions for tortures will be realized in the story. This specific "game" could be doable too. The challenge for me would be to find a water that allows to see a bit of what's going on under the water while still looking like water.
Onix, a "winner" in the end would certainly be fitting. Although I have already planned an intermediate "winner" and there might be more.
But now for some more CDL. The end is nearing but there is still some more pain coming up for Laura and Darla.
Great pictures again! I'm seeing a decent number of my ideas already realized in the CDL story, that's great! Still doesn't hurt to get more of that for the LSC story (well, doesn't hurt me, i hope it will hurt the girls a lot).
And congrats on the 2 year anniversary! Before i found your thread, i visited gurochan maybe once every 2 or 3 months, now i'm here a few times every week, just because i like your work so much.
I can see why that many ideas might be problematic. I just had a lot of fucked up fantasies over the years, and there aren't really any other artists i could ask to do this stuff. I guess it's not that different for everybody else. Just do your best, so far your torture scenes have never disappointed me, and often enough you did things i didn't see coming that ended up really hot.
Oh I'm loving the red hot iron on her petite skin (imagining it sizzling while looking ) hope she gets a good taste of it between her legs & ass cheeks at some point!
PS: if i may ask what bikini are the girls wearing from the summer camp batch ? so I can look it up TY.
Precia, the bikinis are "Hongyu's bikini for Victoria 7" (Fits all genesis 3 and V7 characters)
And now some more from the introduction to the revised summer camp. Starting with the girls from huts 3 and 4. I have not shown the yet because their fate is already decided.
You cheater ;) Instead of doing blood and gore you decided to fill it up with those softcore pictures ;)
Probably you learned that from me LOL
I guess you really wanted to use at least 0.1% of all that content you downloaded and can't find any use.
That water scene looks pretty good
But I think you shoud have used sexier and more diverse clothes than that plain bikini. Maybe even show some girls naked, topless, bottomless (since there are no boys anyway) or masturbating ;) or even engaging in some lesbian sex.
also, you should have colored those bikinis in different colors without using different textures since they are white so can be set to any color. That would really help to identify girls.
Yeah, it woud be strange if bikinis started changing colors now ;)
I guess I will need to wait until they will get stained with blood.
But I just totally forgot that I wanted to ask you What kind of environment you are using here?
I never seen it anywhere.
By the way, since girls are all outside , you may consider adding geometry shells with some light dirt to them later. When they are super squeaky clean it looks very cartoonish.
I like those softcore pics too. It's just nice as a setup to see the girls happy in a natural environment, before all the torture starts. This is the introduction i like to see in a story, that makes all what's coming better because we get a connection with these girls.
The scenery is also interesting. I don't have any good ideas right now, and you are already swarmed with ideas anyway, but it's certainly possible to use some of that for some of the torture sessions. But i don't know your plans for the general story anyway, if the girls find out what's happening right away or if things happen in secret for a while.
And i like those girls from hut 3 and 4. Some of them would have made my top 10, it will be interesting to see what you did with them.
Hey Onix, These girls are just very cleanly and bathe and shower often. No, to be honest, making them dirty would just add another complexity that I really don't need right now.
But I did do two new pics for the intro along your earlier suggestion. Not exactly lesbian but…
So you managed to take off few for those bikinis after all just in the last minute ;) Looks pretty good.
But I think sealing doors and windows was kind of waste of effort, it is not like those girls can run anywhere anyway and if they do they can be caught easily ;) if extra security is needed dogs could do better job. Also if they are locked they cannot enjoy observing their friends being tortured and killed ;)
But maybe you will release them in groups and let then face some horrible surprises? Just observing single girls being tortured is not that interesting and wasteful in this setting as if there are extra observers who are somewhat free and can even interact with guys but are quite terrified by what is happening and can't do anything about it.
Either way you ended in the most interesting place and decided to torture us with waiting for what will happen next. LOL
How very interesting, 37 girls. Still can imagine these guys have so many options to torture and kill a girl that even these 37 options can be depleted. Imagine girl #37, having been through the ordeal of hearing the plight of 36 girls and knowing your fate is sealed…
Onix, I forgot to answer that question so far; The environment is called "Sleep away camp" available on daz3d.com. I added some trees from other environments and a hdri sky.
I certainly don't want to torture any of the visitors to gurochan. Well, except maybe just a leeeetle bit if any of you happened to be pretty young girls…
But I promised to continue the story of Carla, Darla and Laura before I would apply myself to the summer camp more so the torture has to continue for a while.
In more ways than one.
Oh you meanie, not again ;)>>29168
But there is something wrong with this picture text.
It looks like one at least one line is missing
It is realy good time to finish those series, or else those guys will end torturing ground meat. Those girls barely look like humans beings already ;)>>29160
"Sleepaway camp"? Is this what inspired you to make that story as well?
I hope that environment will be useful for me too.
Great to see Laura finally mentally breaking down, and i love what you are doing with Darla!
I wouldn't mind seeing the girls tortured even more, but doing things worse than this would probably leave some serious permanent damage or even kill them, so i guess we are getting close to the end now. I hope to see some of those things in the summer camp.
Some of the text seems to be cut
Yes! Burn her! Burn whole her body. Slowly and thorough. Anything may happen in the Carla room, but I hope, that Malcolm will have enough time to burn Laura everywhere.
(And Jacob will have enough time to rape Darla hisown and spermed deep in her body first time after so many years).
I'm pity these beauties even.
I hope, Guys will make them force to dance and gym naked and look it as the real reality show with camera and photo. After all, what's wrong here? There are many rich guys, who really should watch these cruel show.
Why will they lie for girls? Let it will the show. So, not that show, what girls thought, but the show all the same.
Might as well be called Drabokchan for me, love how extreme it's getting for Laura and Darla and can't wait to see how much worse it's going to get for all three of them.
Drabok you are a true artist. You and Onix are may favorites. The quality of your CG and in depth are your stories, OMG, I never make it to the end.
To speed up the story: Jacob suddenly dies of viagra-poisoning. Making him the first member of the 'Blue Vomit Group'….
Did you know that Santa Croce is the home of the most kinky and cruel Carabiniairi to be found in the whole of Italy?
It's very strange what Jacob's doing. He'd been more comfortable to fuck the suspended girl.
Really? Or just a joke?>>29339
But Jacob thinks he can fuck her much harder when she's on the floor. And the story has it's needs too.
Great updates again! The torture scenes in this story have been really good throughout the whole story, and those last two torture scenes might be the best.
I would have loved to see things play out like the guys had planned.
Don't you think he a bit too angry ;)
It looks like he is torturing his ex wife who put him on the alimony not like she is hawing fun with little girl ;)
This is the greatest scene of torture I have ever seen
1558033631743.jpg is an interesting debut. Among the Drabok masterpieces I miss: a crucifixion with a slow painful death (Sabrina was a nice beginning), a full-blown impalement, some amputations and a disembowelment. Go on with your splendid artwork, Master Drabok, Gurochan's best!
Thanks Onix, you are giving me the opportunity for another one of my afterthought deep psychological explanations: Who do you think Jacob is raping in his mind right now?>>29440
This will probably all happen in the summer camp, except disembowelment.>>29437
To the anonymouse who always makes replies without text: Could you stop doing that?
Thats's all, Jacob is dead…
I hope Malcolm will not so fool to untie Laura. He must remember, what Laura made with Bob, then she's dangerous.
>>29457>Who do you think Jacob is raping in his mind right now?
Using my deductive method and extrapolating from Jacob's story, I can guess that all thsoe guys recently faced divorces and were rapped in their asses by their wives. Or how else they managed to get together?
Jacob is now too happy with his erection so he just wants to cum as fast as possible until he can. He is scared that it will go away before he does ;)
I would not be surprised if he eventually fails in that rape and his dick goes down at the most inappropriate moment humiliating him beyond salvation. (because it is hard to maintain an erection when you have fear in your mind that it will go away and this is why he was unable to get hard all that time, not because of some drugs)
When he got so immersed into torturing his daughter he forgot about his problem and miracle happened.
when he fails, he either gets super depressed or he goes insane and tries to kill her on the spot. And then, I guess, something interesting will happen ;)
C'mon Drabok: the girl has got five nurderweapons stuck in het titties…
Who are you kidding?
Wish I had your skills man. Damn, you're good!
That face expression!!!!!!
Btw. I like these plot twist. I secretly hoped, that these bitches eventually get their revenge.
I love this recent turn of events. I love that the three of them have so much fight, even after being so brutally tortured. 3 tiny little girls vs 4 grown up strong men. The girls should have no chance, but they've overcome all odds and even in their weakened state, they are able to overcome their torturers. Bob, then Tommi, and now it looks like Jacob is going down
These girls are so strong, I'd like to see them take on the the monster that raped Iliana and the two that cooked Harper in a 3 on 3 battle! That ought to be a really fair fight!
Drabok, you set the foundation for this dramatic turn of events long ago, by showing the intelligence, loyalty and strength of these girls. And by showing Darla's darkside. I'm liking this a lot.
holly shit, she just took blood bath ;)
With that gun those guys have no chance.
Looks like Carla is going to dish it out mow.
Drabok, you set the foundation for this dramatic turn of events long ago, by showing the intelligence, loyalty and strength of these girls. And by showing Darla's darkside. I'm liking this a lot.
Well said and ditto! Thanks D
I was looking forward to see them (the CDL girls) die!
You are not the only one, i've known this would come for a while and i'm still not happy about this ending.
I like that they fight back, that makes them more interesting, and i don't mind when they kill one or two of the guys, i just don't like that they will actually win and escape. If there was another twist coming with Malcom still overpowering them after they killed the other guys i would have loved all of it, and that would even give him a good reason to make their deaths the most painful he could imagine - that would be a great alternate ending. But this ending reminds me of mainstream horror movies where the good guys always win, and the desire to see those stories with bad endings instead of happy endings is what got me into guro and torture stories in the first place. And there are unfortunately almost no other artists doing these stories.
Well, you have made your decision, and your plans for the summer camp are very promising, so i'm looking forward to that instead. Especially since i posted a lot of ideas for that story - some of those ideas where what i was hoping for at the end of the CDL story.
Hmm, that's interesting, because I actually started making pictures myself because all what was available if mostly with bad ends. Happy guro is not that common ;)
The best steermen are standing on the beach. In the words of Drabok himself: 'wait for it'……
The CDL-story can still go in several directions. Have faith in the master and meanwhile admire the dramatic of all those facial expressions.
Onix, there are many single pictures, but i very much prefer stories. And the torture stories i found are often unfinished and usually stopped before the really extreme stuff happens, either because the artist doesn't like that stuff or because it got too complicated to do, and those that are finished rarely end with snuff.
There aren't many good 3D artists doing this stuff even with adult victims, and for lolis there is almost nobody. There are a few artists on lolicit going into the right direction with good torture stories, but nothing that extreme.
My taste is very specific, i've learned to compromise and take what's close enough. Drabok is the first artist who has done stuff that just perfectly fits.
Guro content is pretty uncommon especially 3d guro because it is hard to make in general, but if you look for what little is available, "bad end" type stories are more common than "happy guro".
of course, Drabok makes all decisions here himself. But for me, the happy end is preferable.
Now we just need to endure some more waiting until he will finish it
and others: I did think about some end to the CDL story at first, where the girls survive their current nightmare only to somehow step into another one. But that "solution" felt half assed. If In the long time I was doing this story I felt more and more that the if the girls should "win", they should really WIN!
But let's end all speculation with todays update.
Carla is punching all their clocks!!
It ain't over untill the fat lady sings……
Hmm, that was quick. I was expecting some femdom ending and maybe someone losing their dick LOL
But I hope it is not the end yet. ;)
A shame that we could not see Jacob's and Malcom's faces when they got shot. It would have added so much more to the story….
Sad that this story is coming to a close, would have liked to see a third day of ultimate tortures, simply because no one else does it as well as Drabok… but overall it wraps up the story nicely with the girls having killed at least one of their rapists each. This series ending is actually sadder than the GoT series ending.
From a storytelling point of view, that makes sense. They had their failed escape attempt, so their second attempt works out. But from a different point of view: You have often mentioned how you see this as porn and not art. And when i'm watching porn, i mostly care about what's getting me off, and then it's pretty clear which ending i prefer. ;-)
You could still do an alternate ending where Malcolm doesn't get surprised, catches them again and then has a final torture session to kill them. I'm sure i'm not the only one who would like that. And it's not like that has to happen now or never, you can move on to other things and maybe eventually you want to come back to that. It's your decision, i'm just bringing up the option - i was looking forward to their deaths for a long time, and since up to that point no girl ever survived your stories, the possibility that could happen had never crossed my mind until you let us know you wouldn't kill them. I always thought they would try to escape again, i just didn't think they would be successful.
What a fine way to end this story. I actually laughed when Carla said: "Hello Daddy." Love it!
You're the artist, your choice it is to end the story like this and I loved it from the start at the torture museum to the end. These girls have been through hell. If they are killed that's the end of it, now they have decades in front of them in which they will will relive their tortures. That's delicious. I love it. Thanks for your dedication Sir!
Hi Onix, while I have no qualms at killing guys in my story from time to time, I have no interest in male guro as such. So I don't want to spend time on it.>>29688
You are right Timon, so I have just made two additional pics with their faces. But I'm not sure I've gotten the expressions very good.>>29690
Ganymed: It seems that at some time while I was making this story some artistic ambitions have crept in. It's really hard to get rid of them again once you've got these vermin.
An alternate ending would of course be possible, but that would mean another six months or so continuing the same story. My motivation to do that is actually zero.
And now for the really very last pictures of the story of Carla, Darla and Laura and their vacation in Italy.
Starting with the two added pics.
Dear Drabok, thank you very much for all your work en craftsmanship. The CDL-story is a true masterpiece. I understand very well that eventually you had to dig very deep to find the motivation to finish it.
Though it may sound ungrateful for what you've done so far, now I'm very curious how things will unfold in that marvellous summer camp of yours. It seems to me that it's even a bigger mega-project than the CDL-story.
Thank you for offering me the opportunity to practice patience……
A good end for this long story, told over many gurochans. It's good they lived. If we didn't know they could die, it wouldn't be interesting when they are in danger. If we didn't know they could live, it would be less interesting when they don't. Drabok is the only reason I come here. A little pathos and empathy makes the sadism taste better.
Congrats to completing this epic story! It had the most interesting girls so far, it had the best torture scenes so far, and those girls went through more torture than any other girl in your stories. From a story telling perspective the ending makes sense and is well executed, it's just pretty much the opposite of what i was hoping for, but overall it's still your best story.
Maybe you will find the motivation to do an alternate ending eventually. I won't give up hope, even though i don't really expect it.
Now i'm looking forward to the summer camp, and i'm hoping to see some great torture scenes again, and also some slow and
painful deaths for the girls this time.
My dear Drabok, as I went through the whole CDL-story once more, I must say that I see several most exiting angles for a 'CDL-2'-story.
Whenever you would feel up to it, please let me know; we'll compare notes.
And if not, best friends all the same.
That's the amount of drawings that constitute the CDL-story. Respect, respect, respect.
I don't find the right words to say all it, so accept a simple and lame, but very very big THANK YOU !!!
We get to see the girls brutally tortured and the girls get to live. Win win!
That's a pretty good end for this huge story.
Looks like Darla has some trouble with hugging other girls because she is still very spiky ;)
And when Darla ar Carla tuned into lesbians?
Maybe it would be still worth to make one more symbolic picture with the girls outside of the dungeon to show that this finally all over.
Ah man…I'm torn. As a story, this is a nice twist and ending, but as a fan of your guro art, I was hoping for some crazy climax that tops the Ameia and Sabrina stories. Looking forward to your future works (or maybe an alternative ending to this story??)
I'm pleased they escape, I always felt sorry for little Sabrina.
wait all this time to see these bitches fucked to death and it ends like this… thanks, i hate it.
>>29760>wait all this time to see these bitches fucked to death and it ends like this… thanks, i hate it.
wait all this time for some asshole to come along and can't express even a little politeness to someone who's put forth so much effort… thanks, we hate you.
Then you havent been paying attention. He clearly said a while ago that they werent going to die in the end
.. for the greatest guro story of all time. I was hooked the moment Darla was attached to the bondage device, ass up, legs spread, hands fastened and her ass was brutally whipped, her friend sitting in front of her, looking at Darla's ordeal. Just wow
Just because he told us what was coming that doesn't change how we feel about it.
I'll try to be more polite than the other guy. I'm a big fan, i appreciate the effort and i get that it was a lot of work, but this ending is very disappointing after all this time. These girls should get tortured to death, having them escape is like a kick in the balls for every fan who was looking forward to that. Take all the time you need, take a break from this story if you need to, but please make a different ending! This story was the best guro story of all time and it shouldn't end like this!
I believe in the freedom of speech, so everybody should be allowed to express their opinion even if they are not polite about it. I expected reactions like that. I don't enjoy them but I am also not overly bothered.>>29731
Onix, yes, Carla and Darla wanting to marry is a bit sudden. I introduced the idea that they are lesbian and love each other in the girls first reunion and their distraction for Bob, but did not follow up on it very much later.
I still don't think I will ever do an alternate ending for CDL. In my mind that would take away the poignancy and my heart would just not be in it.
Just a thought to illustrate this. I really really don't want to compare myself to Shakespeare. But imagine his reaction if he had been asked to write a version of Romeo and Juliet for more sensitive viewers where they don't die? Or one where they don't fall in love at all because they are both underage? One where they kill each other? Or an all Futa version? Or a version in which Romeo lends Juliet to all his friends to rape and torture?
Well, that last one might actually be an idea for a future story…
I'll just add to that sentiment. The horror story "unlikely happy ending" is done countless time in mainstream media. This series was ridiculously long and I found the ending pretty disappointing. But to each their own I suppose.
I am afraid I agree re ending
But I hope these new cunts are not making it out alive.
Mercedes would already have a couple of loads dumped
Something's defenitly wrong with the old man's left foot….. ;-)
Nice, finally some action pics for the summer camp! We are starting with one of my least favorite girls (i actually made a list and Mercedes is on 37th place out of 37 girls, mostly because she indeed looked very stupid), but she's still very pretty and seeing such a dumb bitch tortured is also quite satisfying. It's not exactly a crucification, but that's a good start! Looks like you have a lot of tools prepared for her and maybe the other girls from this hut.
I get why you don't want to make an alternate ending to the CDL story. Maybe i can change your mind, since i'm apparently not the only one who would like to see that i'll give it at least this one try.
Why do i want it? You have always ended your stories with snuff, no girl has ever survived your stories. I remember when i discovered your first thread, i read the first story, and my reaction was pretty much "nice, he actually followed through and killed a girl, that almost never happens". And then i read the 2nd story and the girl died again when i didn't even expect it. And when that happened for the third time i was finally ready to give up my caution and really expect the girls to die and to look forward to it, and you always delivered, some of it with great torture scenes! To change that in the one story that has been going on far longer than any other story and had the best torture scenes was something i didn't see coming, i had fantasized about how they might die pretty much from the beginning of that story, and my desire to see that happening is what made me comment on your thread in the first place when the old gurochan went to shit and you thought about giving up.
You bring up other authors. I might be wrong here, but i think famous authors are usually consistent about their endings: Either they have always happy endings, or they have always tragic endings, and a few authors do both. But i don't think there are many authors who did happy endings all the time and then made a tragic ending out of nowhere, especially not with their most anticipated work. When you read a story by an author you know, you always have an idea how it will end. If you don't like tragic endings, you only read authors who always have a happy ending, and the other way around.
There are some 3D artists i like who i would never ask to do a snuff ending, simply because they don't do that stuff. And if they ever changed that, i imagine some of their fans would be upset because most people don't like snuff.
I've seen other artists post different versions of their stories before, so it's not like nobody has ever done it. I've seen some hobby authors do "what if?" stories to make one or more alternate versions of their first story, and often that happened because somebody else commented with an interesting idea. And i'm pretty sure even some famous authors had different versions of their stories, they just usually don't publish them. And i don't think we need a version where the girls never try to escape, we just need Malcolm to get away and catch them again. What i would like to see would be an ending with just one final torture scene with Malcolm and all three girls, where he goes all out and does all the nasty stuff he didn't try before because it would kill them, and that can go on however long you like it until they finally die. I think you would enjoy doing such a scene, where the torturer is angry at the girls because they screwed up his plan and really just wants to see how much of his torture their bodies can take. I get that you don't want to do that right now when you just finished the story, and i'm really looking forward to the summer camp anyway, but i think doing such a scene eventually might be interesting for you too. And if you think about the girls in the way that they don't deserve such a fate: They are still fictional characters, and i think those great characters deserve that their story gets completed in the most satisfying way possible, and that means they get tortured to death.
Hello Drabok, would you consider to pack whole CDL in some zip and upload it in some file-store server (Mega for example or dl.free.fr, they have reasonable speeds and longevity of files)?
Timon, You're right, actually both feet are very wrong. Here's a replacement. Unfortunately I had not saved that scene correctly so the new one is slightly different.>>29830
Ganymed, you are very persistent and you have good arguments. Maybe some future time I might come back on my current decision. But for now I really want to work with some new girls.
Thank you for all your effort, Drabok! I really enjoyed all of your stories and CDL was just epic! I hope there will be a CDL 2 as I would also have enjoyed an alternate ending. But I am content with the ending as it is. Not overdone dramatically or heroically. Nice. What I would have wanted to see (maybe in CDL2? ;-) ): only one or two girls survive, because the last bad guy gets distracted by the sounds of the killings and forgets about his tied victim who is then forced to suffer and die slowly and painfully - strangled, drowned or impaled maybe?
This is interesting so you decided to have some character relationships after all ;)
To everyone else asking for alternate ending:
I wonder if you will manage to convince Dabrok to make alternate ending but I doubt if this is going to be a good idea in this situation. Because the best you can expect is those girls being killed quickly, or after they killed every one of those guys they are pretty dangerous to keep alive LOL.
Those are not some puny sluts they deserve respect ;)
I think the alternate ending could be them dying while fighting some mafia gang on the pile of corpses LOL>>29830
There is no that much consistency for endings for other artists either.
For example Uziga or KawadyMAX does various kinds of endings too.
It all usually depends on the story length. Short stories are easy to end with death while a long story like this with well-established characters becomes pretty sad if you kill them.
By the way, this CDL story is pretty similar to KawadyMAX "Sexually Tortured Girls" and they even end similar ;)
I must say I expected the last gate/door out of their to have some type of code lock that set of the explosives if not correct, I kinda missed the big bang and everything/one getting buried.
As for the actual ending the artist is God
I don't expect you to do an alternate ending right now. But if in a few months you come back to the CDL story that's all i was hoping for. Maybe i'll ask again in a few months, for now i'll shut up about it and enjoy the summer camp story instead.>>29838
Well, the alternate ending i'm asking for wouldn't start where this first story ended, doing that would be a different story and i have no idea how that would go. My idea for it would start before Malcolm got shot and just undo the last 10 pictures. What i was asking for is pretty much an ending that goes as fast as possible to the final torture scene - that scene is what i want to see and i think it's what most other critics want to see, and i'm sure Drabok could make that scene interesting for everybody. And i think what i described could be done with around 50 pictures, even though it could certainly get longer if Drabok has some good ideas.
I don't think i have seen much from Uziga, i haven't been into 2d stuff for a while. I have seen some stuff from KawadyMAX, i generally like his works, but while his endings aren't often happy endings, i don't think he has done snuff. "Sexually Tortured Girls" i remember, i had high hopes when i discovered that story and was very disappointed with the ending, that story built up to a great snuff ending with great torture scenes and then had an extremely unsatisfying happy ending. So yes, these stories are similar.
I prefer long stories with established characters, the longer the better. And i still want to see them die in the end, for longer stories that's even more important than for short stories. The longer a story, the longer the anticipation for a great climax. So that's a problem when artists don't want to kill their characters in longer stories, and it's the reason why it's so hard for me to find what i want.
this is the best thread I have seen in years…I love the naked hanged little girls…
Quite a dangerous security mechanism for the guys themselves I would say.>>29836
I don't quite understand that idea. One girl gets forgotten, ok. And at the same time the others manage to break free?
But now some more Summer Camp fun.
I wonder what kind of death you plan for Mercedes but I think she should not die on the table. She should be given chance to come back to her friends and show herself to give them an idea of what is going to happen ;)
And then just as she almost reached then throw her on the ground and nail her to the ground with steel pipe right through her belly leaving her to die.
Continuing from the previous idea of body pile you could do something similar here if you do not run out of memory and leave dead/dying girls all over the place as decorations ;)
So in the end we will have pretty nice scenery and good attraction for tourists LOL
Yay! Drabok is back in his groove with this Mercedes story!
although i think she should have the fear of pregnancy by several guys cum inside her. Pissing on her on the table is pretty degrading. Then mutilation just fantastic
Some curious white 'weed', right behind Eric. Something Darius lost earlier? ;-)
She is too stupid to worry about pregnancy LOL and it is the last think to worry when you are nailed to the table and about to die.
Some peeing woud be nice too, but as i know Drabok, good luck convincing him to do it :)
He dislikes all other body fluids besides blood ;)
yeah summer camp series must be happening in the world without gravity LOL or maybe all those guys are ghosts ? unfortunately that's what all 3d worlds are
But to get rid of that he will now need to use Photoshop.
What is it about seeing 3D renditions of bald dudes urinating that turns you on so much?
Damn again. Note to myself: Better quality control during rendering! And don't hope people won't notice the mistakes.
Like you suspected this is Darius' cum still floating around after I've made the guy himself invisible.
Btw Onix, if you ever want to use the sleep away camp for one of your scenes: It's a quite nice looking environment, but the ground has low resolution. I think that is why it sometimes it looks like things are floating above ground, even if I have made sure to really put them on the ground. Eric's left foot in this picture is an example.
But gravity is overrated anyway.
Fans will be fans…..
The upside is that your work is really looked at.
Great pictures as always! I didn't notice these small mistakes, that's probably because i'm usually not actively looking for those things. One thing i noticed: On the picture with the other three girls, the gags for Karen and Jessica are just balls in their mouths and nothing holding them in place? I didn't see any other parts of the ball gags on those two girls.
I think i will keep posting the position of every girl on my list when you get to them, that way we can keep comparing.
I know i wanted to shut up about the CDL story, but one more thing: I wanted to plan for myself how an alternate ending to that story could go and after a few hours i ended up with a very detailed scenario that didn't really leave anything out any more. It got longer than i expected, but i could post it if you are interested.
Does anybody know what the deal is with the guy who keeps on making posts without content?
And does anybody know if the bump has been just raised or completely removed? I haven't found anything on that in /dis
I forgot this:>>29928
Yes Ganymed, post your ideas, I am interested.
I had already prepared, or at least partially prepared, the current lsc scenes during the last few months and right now I have some free time to complete them.
But don't expect me to keep up this posting speed for very long.
Yes, bump limit was removed it is something like 5000 now>>29977
You are really evil ;) torturing poor girl even after her death LOL
It is interesting to hear that you are preparing scenes for so long time, or I was expecting that you are doing it just like me almost in the real time.
Those were almost 30 pictures for the first girl, and it was the one you found the least attractive, so there really shouldn't be any complaints about the length. I'm certainly not complaining, this is going into the right direction. And i'm very happy you are posting so much right now, even if you can't keep that up for long.
Afaik the bump limit has been raised to 25000, so it has been effectively removed. I read that a while ago in a discussion thread that has apparently been deleted.
No idea about those posts without any content, they happen in a few threads, in this thread just more than in any other. It doesn't really make sense that they are just bumps since most of those threads are on the first page anyway. Maybe missclicks or weird glitches where sometimes people make a post when they just wanted to view the thread? I know some people have problems with imageboards, your threads have been linked a few times on lolicit and there were complaints that this site is very hard to navigate.
Going on to my alternate ending for the CDL story. I went all out with the torture and made a few callbacks to earlier parts of the story:
Everything stays the same until just before Malcolm gets shot, so you just ignore the last 10 pictures. This time, Malcolm spots the girls before they see him. He is already retreating when Darla fires two shots at him, she misses. The girls start chasing him, Darla fires off another shot but misses again when he gets around another corner. Now the two girls stumble upon Laura in her room and decide to free her first. Then the three of them continue their hunt for Malcolm or a way out of the dungeon. They find him in the common room, where he is frantically trying to find something to defend himself against those little nightmares. Now Darla has him right where she wants him and pulls the trigger again - but she ran out of bullets. Malcolm sees his chance and attacks the girls. They try to fight back, but he isn't as out of shape as Jacob, he can fight and they are already injured a lot. He easily deals with Carla and Darla, and while Laura is a good fighter, her fingers are still broken, she can't do enough and he chokes her out.
Malcom now has the three girls captured again. He knows the other two guys are dead. Jacob will be expected upstairs by the police in just a few hours, so he is running out of time, he has to get rid of the girls today. He is really angry about that, not so much about the other guys, he didn't care that much about them, but the girls completely screwed up his plan, even worse than they did it with their first escape attempt, and they came really close to killing him. So he brings them all into position in one room for one final torture session. He wants to kill them now, but he really wants to make them pay for what they did, so he wants to try out all those nasty things he couldn't do before.
The final scene starts with the girls already tied or shackled into position: Carla with her arms hanging from the ceiling, her legs spread and tied to the side. Laura tied to a cross with her arms spread out and a garotte around her neck - something like the garotte you used with Mary, just with another horizontal bar for her arms. Darla is in a very similar position to her very first torture scene, tied to a post with a noose around her neck, there is also some rope that ties her torso to the post. He starts by raping Carla for the last time, then he moves the cauldron with the hot coals between Carla's legs to slowly roast her bottom, she didn't have any encounter with the fire yet, time to change that. Then he moves on by nailing Laura's hands and feet to the cross and starts tightening the garotte to start strangling her, for now it's just uncomfortable and not very tight yet.
He also tightens the noose around Darla's neck and rapes her for the final time. Then he uses the hot iron on Darla, she should get more than just a little taste of it, eventually he uses it to burn out her pussy. Now he gets a big hammer and breaks Carla's legs, so she knows her time as a ballerina is over and also to make it harder for her to get away from the fire under her, she can't really stand on her legs any more. It's time to make the garotte tighter, it's getting harder for Laura to breath. Then he gets out a knife, he might play with it a little bit and give them a few shallow cuts, then he cuts off all their remaining nipples, and then he uses it to cut off Carla's ears and to cut out Laura's tongue.
Finally it's time for a complete dismemberment, he gets a huge axe and Darla loses her arms and legs, that's why she is kept in place with other restraints. And since we don't want her to bleed out just yet he can use the hot iron to cauterize her wounds.
Very early in the story he promised Darla he would "let you keep your pretty eyes… for now", it's time to get back to that and gouge them out with the same tool he used to start her torture on the first day. Now the set is complete, one girl can't hear, one girl can't speak and one girl can't see any more. And it's time to make the garotte tighter again, with her mouth bleeding a lot from losing her tongue Laura barely gets enough air now. Meanwhile Carla's ass and pussy get crispy from the fire.
It's time to get some skewers and use them, this time they don't just go into tits, they go everywhere through their bodies. It will take a while to hit something vital, every girl gets a few skewers but Carla is the focus of attention this time and eventually her lungs get punctured, so he leaves her to choke on her own blood, the skewers killed her in a similar way to Tommi who got killed by her. Laura is barely getting enough air to survive, now it's time to tighten the garotte for the final time so she dies similar to Bob who got killed by her. While her friends are dying, it's time to cut away the rope that ties Darla to the pillar. That leaves her hanging just by the noose around her neck, and so all three girls can die together.
I think you should post that on the lit board as fan fiction for CDL story ;)
But in your scenario, Malcolm is a sex giant if he still manages to maintain his interest in that kind of torture after all his friends got killed and he barely survived himself ;)
and it is no longer porn but some kind of action movie with bad end ;) where girls are chasing their rapist until finally, they get into a typical fistfight. That will take months to complete again where girls get tortured for half of the year again
If you want to have a really bad end for girls and easy to make, just do it like this:
Malcolm arrogantly looks at the girls pointing gun at him and when they try to shoot they are out of bullets.
he then tells them that gun was not fully loaded and they wasted everything already.
then he can just kill them right there in some way and leave the place full of corpses. That will be quick the bad end.
Continuing series with more torture is pretty pointless now if he decided to end them. Drabok should rather focus on the new series.
I mean, you can cut the chase scene and end their escape very quickly if Darla is immediately out of bullets and he takes the two girls down right there - i don't mind that, that scene was pretty much the last part i wrote down.
But i think just quickly killing them isn't really the ending this story deserves either. I would prefer it over their escape, but i always wanted a torture scene to end it all where they get tortured to death, i was looking forward to an ending that topped every ending so far. And throughout the whole story while the torture scenes were great, they were always limited since the girls couldn't get damaged too much, an unlimited torture session was missing. And it wouldn't be out of character for Malcolm to do something like that. He didn't really care that Bob got killed either, the only problem for him was that it screwed up his plan.
So something in the general direction of this final scene is what i was hoping for, even though you could certainly make some changes and cuts to that. For example you could cut the rape scenes, the knife scenes, the leg breaking and the whole dismembering, that leaves us just with: Crucification and garotte for Laura, slow burning and skewers for Carla, burning iron, gouged out eyes and hanging for Darla.
could I request (beg) one more picture with a spike also through one of the tits/nipples and perhaps another in the cunt. What happened to the nails in her left tit?
The other two breaking free is the reason for one torturer to turn towards them and 'forget' about his girl, who is in some bondage which could kill her (suffocation, drowning, impalement, etc. because a rope breaks, a chair falls or sth. like that). And she dies because he does not come back and the other girls do not get to her early enough. That was my idea.
I really enjoyed your new story on Pixiv THANX
Thank you all for the comments!>>29993
Maybe in a future, similar scene, OK titkicker?>>30005
I got the idea now saddict.>>29979
A well thought out possible ending Ganymed. I really enjoyed reading it.(But I still won't commit to do an alternative ending.)>>29978
Onix, so far I did do my stories strictly in chronological order. But working that way I ran into some time consuming dead ends when I discovered that some scene just would not work and then I had to redo a whole sequence because of that.
So for the summer camp I had prepared some of the difficult scenes first with just the main characters without the environment. Difficult meaning tortures or deaths mostly. with the corresponding textures or decals for blood and stuff trying out if I could make them look alright.
About the gags: I think if the balls are big and pliable enough it would be impossible for the girls to get them out of their mouths without the use of their hands.
Making the straps invisible also solves my problem that the straps often clip into the faces or look too loose and clip into the hair.
Does that dialogue implies that she will stay alive ? :)
i doubt for long. Her dad's friends probably didn't double vag her. She might regret saying she like sex. She still has tits and a clit i suspect our guys will be rearranging her anatomy
I'm glad you enjoyed my ending for the CDL story. I hope you will eventually make something like that, but i know this would take a lot of your time. Since a torture scene like this would probably be too much at once for the LSC story and i think every new story would also need a lot of buildup before this, this alternate ending might be the best way to really do a scene like that, so whenever you feel like you want to do that, i hope you come back to the CDL story. And if you don't, i really enjoy your other work too, the summer camp is starting very promising.
So we get some real backstory here for the next girl, i like that! And of course not all the girls are virgins, i wouldn't be surprised if there were some more among the older girls. Maybe she can have some actual fun herself before things turn bad for her, it's a nice twist to have a girl who enjoys what's happening for now, i'm sure it will get worse for her eventually.
Karen is number 21 on my list, so somewhere in the middle, she is very pretty but it's a tough competition. That whole list was based on just the two initial pictures we got for every girl. Once we see more, things could change in my mind, but i'll keep this initial list unchanged as a reference.
Well, killing a girl who actually likes sex and gets wet while getting raped woud be a crime against humanity LOL
But besides that some rules were conveniently introduced saying that some girls will not be allowed to kill. And this girl is currently only one who got in close relationship with those rapists and they are treating her pretty well ;)
Well, the incredibly stupid void poster has struck again numerous times. It shouldn't but … it's really beginning to bug me. I see my thread on top, I hope for a new comment … and then it's just nothing again.>>29979
Do you really think these are honest mistakes Ganymed? I can't believe that anymore.
Of these void posts are any kind of sabotage attempt than I guess there's only one way to counter that: post more.>>30088
Ahmm, Onix … not so much.
One problem is that the Karen scene is from my first plans for LSC where all the girls would have been killed rather fast in the camp itself. And even after I changed my plans she had to go quickly, because honestly, she might be pretty, but the hair I gave her is too hard to pose if she is not standing upright or lying on a surface.
There you have it, sometimes the reason for my girls to get executed quickly instead of being tortured for an appropriately long time can be rather petty.
Inflatabla balls go into the mouth small and cannot be removed once full of air, if you need a good explanation for balls without straps ;)
haha although a suggestion would be a cattle mouth gag - called a drink water gag stops the bitch biting down. Then double cock in the gob to block the airway and hold the nose. The bitch soon passes away.
After the last update i wanted to say that the guys might go the other way and kill her faster because they don't want consensual sex, i just thought i shouldn't be bloodthirsty for once. And then that's exactly what happens!
This was a pretty fast kill, but i don't mind if we get more time with some more interesting girls instead. Since i'm not really here for the consensual sex either.
On the gag discussion: There are plenty of girls, i wouldn't mind if you tried out different gags on different girls.>>30122
I still wouldn't rule out honest mistakes, since as you found out yourself, it's just one click once you view the thread. And as i said, there are direct links to all of your threads on other sites, i think you even linked to this thread yourself on pixiv in some comment, so some people could end up in a thread without any idea how the site works. So to add to your advise for everybody: If you followed a direct link to this thread, the same applies! Once you click on "New Reply", you will make a post, and if you haven't written anything in the comment field it will be an empty post.
Of course it could also be a troll. This is just the right amount of posts to be mildly annoying, so it's hard to tell.
>Nobody reacted much to the way Mercedes, the first girl, died. Did any of you like the spikes? Because there are more of them coming up.
I loved the spikes. I like it even more though when the boys are actually having sex with the girl as the girl dies. You've done a few of these in the past (Amelia, Sabrina & Quill, etc.)
This is looking great! First, the whole scenery at the lakeside seems really nice, and having a second place for more torture set up seems like a good idea. And then of course those torture devices are looking very promising. Looks like there is more for those two waiting than for the first two girls, i'm looking forward to that!
It looks like the two girls will be able to watch each other, and maybe get tortured at the same time, that should make the scene even more interesting. Going to my list: Jolina is my number 19, somewhere in the middle like Karen, there are a lot of girls very close. Jessica is easily my favorite in this hut, overall my number 10.
Can't really say much about the spikes you used on Mercedes. They worked for me, it looked like they would do a good job in similar situations. Always depends on what you want to nail. If you nail arms and shoulders they are great, for some other stuff they might be too big - one spike covered a complete eye, that worked in that scene, might not work if you nailed smaller stuff like for example fingers, lips or a tongue.
Tools if the trade are good whatever is most effective.
Are you planning on recycling the bodies in the Kitchen? Got to feed the guests after all we don't want them all skin and bone.
I love the torture devices
the detail is fantastic I also love the spikes Could we see the tools the guys have by the lake The tools on the table were great for the imagination
The empty reply i think is just a bump
This story plot is getting a bit messy. ;)
You think so, Onix? (LOL). Yes the plot is getting messy! That's what you get when you change a script several times during a story.
And it's going to get even messier.
I loved the spikes and the strangling. This is getting awesome
As you mentioned Swanaya I have done that several times already. I will also do it in the future but certainly not every single time a girl dies. That would be quite boring.>>30196
Interesting. I too think that Jessica is a good character so she stays in the story a bit longer. Jolina is farther down in my list because in my opinion she looks good from some angles but then again her body looks subtly wrong and her face much too old with other angles and expressions. But of course you could not see that in just two previous pics.>>30198
The situation has not improved since the Harper story. I still can't do a convincing butchering, so no kitchen recycling just yet.
And everybody else: Thanks for the comments.
As you mentioned Swanaya I have done that several times already. I will also do it in the future but certainly not every single time a girl dies. That would be quite boring.
For me, it never gets old, but to each his own :-) I always appreciate your work regardless of what you choose to do
Especially in the middle, my ranking is very close. There are probably 10 girls in my list behind Jolina that could just as easily be ahead of her if i made the list on a different day. But when i made the list, she ended up ahead of them. And you did a good job so far in the recent pictures with her, i don't think i would put her lower on my list right now.
At the top or bottom of the list it's much easier. I'm not sure if i like Karen or Jolina more, but i'm sure i like Mercedes less and Jessica more than those two.
I love your work. If you don't mind the repetition, I'd love to see more of the girls have nails and spikes hammered through them like the first girl.
I'd also love to see some of the girls strung up with meat hooks through their hands and feet and tits.
I'd especially like to see hands and feet, arms and legs cuts off, or a girl's pussy cut out.
Could you add a sexy adult woman to the crew of torturers?
Limbs will be cut off in due course, but I cannot cut out a pussy in Daz Studio.
Now back to Jolina and Jessica.
Dear Drabok, I'm not worthy too look at your work. What you made of all that saliva….it looks phenomenal!
I love how Jolina has to curve her back to avoid poking herself with those giant rusty-looking screws. Her saliva splashing on her loli breast and forming strings is awesome. Thank you
I absolutely loved the spikes! Especially the ones in her shoulders and her arched back due to those. That was great and I am looking forward to your promise to keep more spikes coming. I love skewering. Maybe you could use one girl as a pin-cushion with 100s of long needles stuck into her whole body? That one should be tied with barbed wire instead of rope of course. And let her live long - and watch.
I also like the promising three spikes in Jolinas back.
The torture scenes for those two girls are starting great! Nice whipping for Jessica, a really good start that keeps her body mostly intact for more rape and torture, i'm happy we will spend more time with her. And Jolina's situation will probably get much worse very soon. I'm curious if that will involve the spikes in her back or if there's something different coming for her.
Thank you very much for putting such effort in making high quality images. Would you share with us how you make them? What software is this and how do you get the models?
Do you make the girls yourself?
The skin texture and the muscle features are really amazing! I didn't realize that technology has come so far as to be able to create such realistic skin, muscles and other body details.
I wrote sever chapters of a story where this group is into collecting girls and once in a while get together to get rid of girls that are worn out through painful torture.
I would love to be able to illustrate it.
Jessica is in the best position for a whipping of girls!
Oh, The whipping of a nude stringed makes really hard the man cock. He can whip a girl, then rape her. Then he continues to whip her, it makes him hard again to ready to the next rape. Then he whips her more, and he gets ready to the next rape. This is the magical torture.
I hope to se your story some day!
I am using a 3D software called Daz Studio. It's available for free on Daz3d.com. But while the 3D software is free, the content for it, that's everything you see in a scene, is generally not.
You should visit renderosity.com and renderotica.com to see what I mean.
To you and everybody else: I am willing to tell you how I do specific details in a picture. But you have to learn the basics about how Daz Studio works by yourself. Teaching anybody that would take me much too much time. There are a lot of tutorials and forums in the internet you can find by googling. There are also good tutorials on youtube.
If you do not know the basics about characters, materials and other things you would not understand my answers to specific questions.
Of course, I don't expect you to teach anybody to to 3D object creation and/or rendering. I have some knowledge of this. Starting to learn more and more. Learning about mesh-modelling, lighting, texturing, rigging and animation.
What I have never seen answered (probably, because it's too specific) is how to have a soft object give way to another like a vagina opening when a penis or other object enters. That it opens up around the object. And that in such a way with realistic deformation.
What also would be interesting to be able to do is realistic tearing of the vagina and breasts if torn off. That would be hard to do, wouldn't it?
And things like tearing off skin also seems extremely difficult.
I really don't mean any disrespect but your answer kind of illustrates my point about learning some basics about Daz Studio (Or its similar predecessor and currently only direct competitor Poser) on your own before asking questions. And I really mean basics about those programs, not 3D software in general.
You don't need knowledge in 3D object creation, mesh modeling or rigging or even much about textures to start using them. They are made for using preexisting characters and other models to create scenes. They are not meant for creating original 3D objects.
So your question about vaginas can be answered really easily. When you download and install Daz Studio you also get basic human characters for free. But then you'll need genitals for them. Some are also available for free, some (usually better ones) you have to purchase.
They come with premade morphs. So to open a vagina, you just dial "Open genitals" and its done in seconds. And how to find and use those morphs is really one of the very very basic functions of Daz Studio that you have to learn yourself.
again. You are completely right about tearing off things. To my knowledge it would be impossible to do in Daz Studio. If its possible at all you would have to use a real professional 3D modeling software.
Or if you are talented for that you could do it more easily in postwork with 2D software like Photoshop or gimp.But if you do that you have to to it again for every following picture where you want to show the same effect again.
Both girls are looking great in these scenes! The rape scene for Jessica might be one of my favorite rape scenes so far. I especially like her facial expressions, you can clearly see her growing desperation, especially in picture 113 that look is just perfect. And with Jolina, i think you have put her into just the right position so any problems you mentioned with her body aren't noticeable for me, and i like her facial expressions too: You can clearly see her confusion turn into disbelief and then growing desperation towards the end. Overall i love the facial expressions in this whole scene, they are really good at showing the reactions they are supposed to show, and i love those reactions.
Could Jessica tell us about her periods
Are we about 14 days - when we could get pregnant. They don't know or realise they are going to die and becoming pregnant with all that baby making juice is just one more humiliation.
Can the guys spit in their faces and bite their tits?
Jolina is one of the sexiest girls you have ever created. Her body is so fucking sexy and I loved watching this little slut being face raped and whipped bound to that post.
Cant wait to see what happens to her next
Also is there an archive anywhere of all your works including your older ones?
And… Do you ha d like a Subscriberstar or Patreon tip jar?
Love both girls being whipped next to each other. Each pause in their own ordeal is negated by hearing the other girl groan and scream in torture, while knowing such suffering wlll befall herself again not much later. The girls are lovely, with smooth developing bodies, budding breast and beautiful faces. Such girls just deserve to be taken to an abandoned place for torture and rape.
Thank you!!! Always look forward to the continuation!!!
How about to use drugs to make a girl to a will less slave ?
She can help the man until the end…
The best whipping, when girl is whipping on tits!
Pregnancy is really not one of my fetishes. A tit biting should be possible, I'll probably try it sometime later. Spitting in the face is probably much harder. I don't have anything yet that resembles spit in a face.>>30296
My archive is pretty much here on gurochan, there's pretty much everything I've done so far here.>>30300
No. I don't see how I could and stay anonymous at the same time.
Your productivity is truely unbelievable.
Yeah, your story itself is more than enuogh of the reason to follow your thread.
and it feels that you are getting better over time in that aspect too ;)>>30381
this looks really promising. maybe it will end like I expect this time ;)
So you are taking your time with these two girls and even giving them a break. I thought you might do one girl after the other, but i like it much more this way. Hazel probably won't last that long. This device looks like the one from your very first story with Rose, will be fun to see that in action again. And i like everything else about this scene too, brandings are always great, and i like that you keep her gagged.
Hazel is number 20 on my list, just between Jolina and Karen. Right now i would put her ahead of both of them, i agree with the guys, she has a really nice ass.
I think I see what you mean Onix. It looks as those two could go against each other in some contest. That would have been a good idea too, but I have planned other things for them.>>30390
Changing my opinion of a girl after doing more pictures is something that happens to me too constantly. And of course you had only two pics of each girl for your initial list.
>>30548>I think I see what you mean Onix. It looks as those two could go against each other in some contest. That would have been a good idea too, but I have planned other things for them.
Oh no not that at all (I think it woud be not even good idea to do this now). Because guys told that the next task for the girl will be to find their friend, I hope girls will have a chance to do that and find something interesting. ;)
The last girl from the group (or 2 remaining girls) can be released temporarily just to find what happened to their friend. Imagine the confusion and fear on their faces when they see all that and then they get their "rewards"
For a bit more fun, guys can tell them that this is just a makeup and she is just acting LOL
Actually that could be interesting funny idea (not necessary now) if the girls are told that they are making horror movie scene and they have to act as realistic as possible. This way girls will clam down seeing all those corpses and guys will be able to trick then into doing whatever they want. And they will not try to run away ;)
Yeah, my list will probably change a lot over time. Some of that could depend on what you are doing with the girls.
I love what you are doing with Hazel. This device seems perfect for this kind of torture, and you found a great way to keep her hands out of the way.
For other girls, since i'm not really into calming them down and more into inspiring more fear and terror in the girls: Once you have enough bodies lying around, it could certainly be a nice idea to show them to some of the girls before their own torture really starts. Especially very disfigured bodies could be a real shocker to see. And in some cases not just bodies, but also some of their friends who are still alive, just in a lot of pain.
You are so primitive LOL
Don't you think it woud be more interesting if girls find their friends get terrified and when you are fully satisfied with their terror, they calm down just not to resit being tied or put into torture device and then they once again notice that it is all for real after all and get even more terrified again when they find out that those nails or skewers are not some movie props but they are already tied up and cannot escape ;)
If you keep same terror expression on their face for all the time it will kinda get boring. If you change their emotions you will get to experience same thing twice.
They are already calm in the beginning, and i'm just always really into seeing their fear and despair, that's just as good as the physical torture. ;-)
But yeah, after thinking about it a little more, your idea could be really interesting too. There are a lot of girls, maybe the guys can try different ideas on different girls. Just like they try different physical torture methods, they can also try different psychological ideas to get the best reactions.
Either way, first we need some more bodies before either of these ideas can work. ;-)
I love your pics. How do you create them. I have lots of ideas but I dont know how to work. Hope you post more and more
You're surpassing yourself again, Drabok. First a nice, suspended whipping and now branding an impaled cutie. Is no girl safe for you?
I like red hot iron tortures.
I might have scooped some spunk from Mercedes and Karen and smeared and pushed it into Hazel and forced home with the wooden dildo's. I presume the wood is rough and plenty of splinters will pierce the vagina and rectum. The guys need to think about these splinters when they fuck and bugger Hazel. Her nipples going to burnt off?
I am using a program called Daz Studio. Please go to daz3d.com, renderosity.com and renderotica.com to get an impression of how it works.>>30650
Well, her nipples will not get burnt off. Maybe some other girls.
yes! make Jolina suffer! :D
This is just amazing!
The spikes are working really well for that. It must be horribly painful for Jolina to get her leg pretty much completely destroyed this way.
I like how all the girls are reacting slightly differently but still in a very natural way to their situation: Hazel and earlier Mercedes didn't get any time, their torture started with some really bad stuff without any warning, so they are just confused and didn't have a chance to process what's going on. For Mercedes it was over before that could change, maybe Hazel will get enough time to understand her situation.
Jolina is just completely in denial. It seems like deep down she understands her situation, it's just so horrible she isn't ready to accept that as reality.
And Jessica is too innocent too understand exactly what's happening, but she does understand these are bad men doing bad things and she can't do anything about that, so her only reaction is fear and desperation. And that will only grow when even worse stuff is happening to her and to Jolina.
I like all of those reactions, and there are of course still some other possible reactions, for example: Begging for them to stop, offering to do whatever they want, trying to be tough and to talk back at them, trying to resist in any way possible, or even being smart and trying to find a way to escape (but eventually failing).
Those spikes seem really nasty!
Thank you, Drabok.
Jolina has so little idea what Arran can do with a claw hammer and spikes. I would certainly spike the tits and nipples perhaps breaking a rib, rupture a lung. But the hammer as a dido, the claw on the clit, ripping the tender little clit bud off. The whole claw and hammer forced into the still unused cunt. The claw ripping on a cervix. Perhaps the claw could gain enough purchase to pull out the entire womb - although it should be full of sperm first. So many options just on Jolina. AndJessica - only on hole number 2. And the spunk in hole 1 working away looking for an egg.
Wonderful…. keeps me up at night.
Would some of your humble fans be able to post their amateur alternative scenes?
lIke having their little tits kicked!!
Why do not you put the glowing iron in the pussy or in the ass? You can also put mice or rats in there! Or you put her on the head and put a funnel in the ass and fill in thick hot asphalt. At some point she is full of it and it smokes from the mouth, the pussy and the ass. You can seal the ass so that nothing comes out! … or is that too bad?
Just great! Thank you for your work, Drabok!
Love little Hazel's plight, impaled in her holes, her hands firmly constrained, her body defenseless against the onslaught of the burning irons. Her captor has shown great restraint not taking out her rear dildo and unloading himself in her.
Is it illegal to view stuff like this in the US?
Not trying to start anything, I truly don't know.
You, Drabok, Onix, and the artist behind KS's art……… we live in good timjes. Illegal or not, do not worry: your work is preserved.
KS = KC
Of course you can post alternative scenes, although I don't know how you are going to do that.>>30693
I could probably do some of that but then I would have to spend at least six more weeks or so with Hazel alone. But I have 36 more girls in the camp. So no.>>30784
I have no idea. That would be answered by somebody from the USA.
And now some more pics
Arran doesn't seem to have any problems with the spikes in that pole…..
Great pictures again!
Yeah, once Jolina is completely broken it's time to finish her, probably with some more spikes, maybe the ones already waiting for her in her back. And watching that is just part of Jessica's warm up and will increase the horror for her even more, that's exactly what i was hoping for with those two girls in one scene.
Of all contributors to this channel, you are absolutely the master. No discussion possible. And I note that there are some artists who are following your way. This channel is becoming something big, thanks to you.
Oh my god this is incredibly awesome, I love how Jolina doesn't react anymore. That bitch is broken. I hope she suffers a slow and painful death
With her mind gone and legs broken, Jolina never even notices the shit covered cock pounding her throat. But she's still a virgin?
Second and double to what Temon said. The master carrying the channel. I have nothing to add or suggest (others do plenty of that lol), I greatly enjoy whatever you create and share. Thank you again for your efforts and sharing Drabok.
To all the 3dcg-masters of today.
Please consider signing your pics. You are creating something important here.
Know your classics. Dolcett has become a phenomenon. Even today people try to re-anact his fantasies. His pics are remade in 3dcg, and bloody successfull.
Do not be too modest. Sign your work.
Thanks Anonyturk for your effort, but I strongly suggest to leave it to the master himself / masters temselves to choose a sign that fits him / them.
Looking forward to the result.
You're not taking this seriously.
He seems to be hammering a nail in your suggestion Timon. You should feel honoured to be chosen for that. Just like these girls, their stupidity deserves punishment.
A point. But maybe I was being flippant too?
Did not think to come to this thread for a laugh, but your last post is really hilarious, Drabok. :-D Comic Sans to top it off? Laughed my ass off.
Although I would have suggested something rainbowy/my little pony or anything like that myself. Something which is a total difference to your art, but it should not distract from the picture too much.
I'm glad I could make some of you laugh for once.>>30832
is just a joke, and not meant to be at the expense of anyone. I think almost every suggestion is valuable, even if I choose to ignore lots of them.
Timon and Anonyturk have actually made me think about somehow signing my pics. Although when I do it I think it would be in a rather neutral way.
I think that neither you or I will really benefit from adding signatures because signatures are useful when you post single pictures that can be scattered on the internet.
When your pictures are mostly 500 image series LOL, there is a little chance that your name will get lost.
It is even very unlikely that someone will repost then without packing into the archive
However, adding some signature and title to the first picture in the series may be pretty useful. But at least for me, It is hard to decide the series name and sometimes other people unintentionally do it for me ;)
That one made me laugh out loud! Really not what i expected in this thread.
I don't know if a signature is really needed for your pictures. But i did notice that some of your pictures have been posted even on this site in some random threads once or twice, and it didn't seem like the people posting them or commenting on them knew where they were coming from.
As always, excellent work. The only constructive feedback I can even think of offering is leaving spunk on the used girls while dying/dead. I have no idea how much extra work that would be, though, so I just say keep up the good work. Not nearly enough people making high quality content for our particular niche.
I have run several scenarios through my mind this last day, but never this. Compare 680 Jolina’s developing tits standing proud, jutting out firm. Although with sperm and saliva run off rom Arran’s head fuck. Then by 921 Arran has started their destruction nearly removing both nipples with the ferocious whipping. Her tits are now scarred for life. To 009. Her nipples are now inverted. Crushed beyond recognition, the firm mammary gland tissue mushed with the broken ribs. The development of her precious tits stopped forever.
Jessica is screaming inside and out. Her friend brutalized. She can feel the other stranger guy’s cum running down her leg. She knows she has not push out much the rest is inside her still. It was a huge load. Once she ovulates she’s pregnant. And the stranger said this was only her first rape of many!
Arran and Eric can relieve themselves on the lifeless worthless Jolina before driving away.
From the moment i saw those screws in Jolina's back i expected them to play a role in her death. That was a simple and very brutal way to do that. Jolina was gagged through all of it, she could scream but never try to talk her way out of it or talk to Jessica. And now Jessica can watch the corpse of her friend for a while to increase her own horror before the guys eventually come back to her, great! And i imagine when the guys come back they will bring more girls.
I can't really make any more suggestions right now, what you are doing so far seems very much in line with what i was hoping to see. Right now i'm just curious what exactly you have in mind for Hazel, she will probably end up drowning, but that's all i can guess from that picture.
Great work as always. If you are still looking for ideas I have two that I thought of because of the gymnasts:
1. Split between two objects, just a foot/shin on each. A gymnast girl should be able to oversplit that pretty easily. But then one could add weights, and then pick them up and drop them with the weights so they split wider. At some point either their hips will dislocate or their legs will break, either way they will fall off of it (unless their feet are tied down). One could put a spike underneath.
2. A tippie toe squat ( see reference below ), except with something under their asshole ( I would prefer a beer or wine bottle ) and a strip of nails under their heels. And then add weight, either the bottle goes in, the nails go in, or both.https://xhamster.com/photos/gallery/9744196/187423276
I first thought the answer was 'no way' (with Daz Studio) but after trying out a few things I am not so sure anymore. So it's a maybe (but still improbable.)>>30948
What is sure is that with that nice little pond in the camp somebody would have to be drowned. And yes it's going to be Hazel. But how? You'll see.
Sadly I can't use the lake in the mountains for drownings because the water there looks much less well. So this will be the only drowning in this story.
Darius can just wank into her arse or cunt just for relief. Darius face fantastic. Lost in himself, his cock enjoying the warm tight arse. Absolutely no interest or concern for the female being used.
She, it, the hole, is as meaningless as the right hand. And once relieved and the five minutes of pleasure has passed, the filled condom cunt can be discarded.
There are plenty, plenty of holes available, they are all disposable and once passed the lips or sphincter all are very much the same.
Hazel just made it in time – to stay alive – she will probably regret that extension to this mortal coil. But at least she can pass into the next life, a used cunt without a hymen, dutifully ruptured by Aaron. With so many young cunts to play with, Aaron does not need even need to waste of load of fertile baby juice on Hazel.
Her gob can still be used as she drowns or is tortured more.
There will be plenty of rotten slimy stinky logs or broken bottles or pieces of stroller in the pond that could be forced into various orifices alive or dead!
Perhaps a dead fish can be forced into her now open vagina or down her throat.
Would have liked liked Hazel to loose her tits to the hot iron – but one cannot get everything one wants.
being pedantic where are the ripples in the water. Looks like they are posing Master.
Rape in the water while she is struggling for air is a nice combination. This water looks clear enough to see her face while it's under water, that's good.
Drowning seems like a tricky thing to do in 3d. You want to show her struggle for air, but with too much water movement you can't see her clearly any more. There doesn't seem to be an ideal solution to that problem. I've looked through my collection and the few drownings i found by other 3d artists usually had the victim contained and then had the water slowly rising, i haven't seen anybody do a drowning like this.
Darkscion: Leaving spunk on a dead or dying girl isn't actually additional work once it's applied in the first place. I did it with Mercedes, the first girl. But Karen and Jolina got heir loads on their backs and it would have run off or been wiped off for their last pics.>>31052
I can only confirm what Ganymed says. When the surface of some "water" in Daz Studio is too irregular everything beneath the surface will become invisible or very distorted.
Besides, creating water movement caused by an object is very tricky too. Daz Studio has no fluid simulation. There's one method I know to create circular "ripples" in an object with D-Former but it often does not give useful results. In this case it didn't so I just added some splash props for some pics.
I LOVE how Hazel struggled for air with no control of the situation. I hope she ends up drowning very, very slowly
While I could not give a fuck for Hazel - the bitch is built to suffer and the more suffering the fucking better, but Drabok you are ok?
Thanks for your concern. I'm OK. But I definitely can't post every other day for long you know.
But today let's seer Hazels end.
Imagine Aaron kicking Hazel in her spunk filled cunt even though she's dead. If I was Darius I would have kicked her in the tits even if only little nubs. Even when she drowns you can stand on their little chest.
When they are disposed I presume the weights can be attached to chain and hooks with the sharp hooks being rammed into the cunt or arse or even shoved down the throat with the sharp points rupturing her neck or abdomen. Haha fish food.
if there were piranha, especially Pygocentrus nippleri, the girls will soon be savaged. The fish love the hard nipple and surrounding alevolae and particularly the developing juicy ciltoris. Following the smell of sperm they will soon be ripping into the vagina and womb, tongue, throat and stomach and anal structures, depending on the girls immediate history!
Nice ending for Hazel, i think that drowning looked nice, even without too much water movement it was possible to see her struggle. No idea yet what you have in mind for Grace and Mia, i guess we have to wait a while to find out.
Maybe it's time for my list. Grace is pretty high on it at number 7, so even ahead of Jessica, even though that would change right now since i would put Jessica into my top 5 after her first round of torture. Mia is my number 36.
Both girls have nice bodies, what made the big difference for me were their faces on those initial pictures. Grace had that look like an innocent, sweet and trusting girl on her first picture, a girl who would totally go with a stranger to help find a lost puppy because she would never expect anything evil, and i like those innocent girls. Mia on the other hand looked like a very confident, self-absorbed and arrogant bitch, especially on her second picture. For both girls i still got that impression on the later pictures, especially for Mia. It's probably not what you have planned, but if there was any girl in the camp who would turn against the others, Mia would be my best guess.
Still at your disposal for the moment, because I as the main judge have saved them personally for now, are Fe, Lacie, Myu, Molly, Laurie and Julieta. Too late for request/suggestions? One of my favorite campers is Myu. I was thinking she could be forced to suck off all four guys at knife-point. Not cooperating so she gets shallow jabs in her throat and stabs in her tits until she behaves. After all four finish raping her, they would pull her up on her feet by her hair and simultaneously run her through with their long sharp blades. If not her, perhaps Molly or Lacie? Just a thought
This made me laugh for few minutes LOL
probably could count as new fetish: necro ahegao
Also where that camp is located anyway? I thought it is some island but you can even drive a bus there without any roads, Their car is strangely capable to traverse an almost impossible landscape for such a model. They even got a boat in the lake which is 2 feet deep LOL
I am not sure if you will see it as a compliment of criticism, but at with this story you crossed the line twice LOL so even If I do not generally like suffering, but here, it is just funny so I like it anyway. :) looks like some horror comedy ;)
Those guys made so much effort to prepare everything they really deserve big praise ;)
I think in the end when all girls will be killed some family can come to this camp and have fun with those corpses LOL it would be funny to see some pictures of boys or brother/sister playing with dead girls
I'll see if I can do the run through with knives thing.>>31169
Lol. Yes the story has holes big enough you can drive a truck through. And the big van was obviously driven onto the camp grounds through one of these holes.
I don't see a problem with the boat in the mountain lake though.
This basement should make it easier not to have to clean out one hut after the other and instead mix it up a bit. And even though it might be slightly unrealistic to have such a basement in a simple hut at a mountain lake, the upside of having all of this and lots of torture devices available more than makes up for that. Overall i don't mind the plot holes at all, they aren't taking me out of the fantasy and are making it much easier to get the scenes we want.
Not much torture in this update, instead cleanup and preparation. So my anticipation for the next scene is only growing, and i still have no idea what you are planning for Grace. Anyway, more whipping for Jessica will be great. Mia seems out of the picture for now.
It is not about plot holes. It is more about the idea that you decided that your story need all that in the first place :)
As all those props are totally unnecessary for the story but you still decided to add them that way deliberately reducing story realism.
Of course, I do not complain about that and it is interesting to see what you will do next.>>31284
here I think you shoud use another splash with bigger water droplets. or now it is very unrealistic as if someone dropped firecracker not a dead body>>31295
I guess this camp must be some secret military base LOL I will not be surprised if sometime we will see an underground nuclear ICBM silo or submarine port :)
Dear Onix, in all modisty, I think that you are the last person to talk about realism. It's the very aspect that distinguishes Drabok's work from yours. In all Drabok's stories, however far fetched they sometimes may seem, one can allways think that it could be possible in real life. Whitch is never the case in your stories.
Basement cells…hidden torture chambers, lovely victims…!!!
This place must be heaven!
Looking forward to watch the next chapters of this fantastic story!
Thank you, Drabok!
This summer camp with an underground dungeon is beginning to seem a Summa of loli torture. I expect to see more creative and horribly refined torments because apart from Jolina's case everything has been rather classic, however beautiful. The nailing table for Mercedes has the precedent of Sabrina who I consider superior to Mercedes because of her facial expressions and painful attentions administered.
Thank you Drabok and show us more of your masterful imagination!
I think someone here might be able to give you a hint…
In case you haven't figured it out yet, that's part of Draboks Sabrina story. It's one of his earlier stories and all of it is in his first thread on this site. If you haven't done that already, you should really check out that thread.
About the realism and if all of that was necessary: I think this is the best solution to get the scenes we want. And it's still believable enough for me. Maybe this really was a secret military base, who knows? Honestly, i don't really care as long as it's good for some great torture scenes. ;-)
First I am not complaining or criticizing. I Just said it because for me this story is just funny. I hope Drabok will not get offended because his pictures of girls getting tortured make me smile or sometimes laugh. LOL
If you compare my work with his, we are not competing on who is more realistic. There is no that much difference after all. Some of what happens in my works actually happened in real life and I even have evidence ;)
If we speak about real criticism, what now disappoints me in those series, is that while it all started very promising they eventually got reduced into the repository for schoolgirls for rapists. And there is almost no connection between anything so the story is way oversimplified.
It is not that hard to make some reasonable plot but I have a suspicion that Drabok may be doing all that deliberately to avoid situation resembling CDL story ;)
On the other hand, it is not that bad because now it turned out pretty funny.
By the way, this picture >>31288
looks pretty sad for me. It is probably the most horrible thing Drabok did on those series. LOL
I hate to bring it to you, Onix, since you are one of the most active members here and I do like your stories and you are very productive and all… but compared to Drabok you are really just an amateur. :-(
I do not want to insult you, I just had to post this, because you said "There is no that much difference after all" and - sorry - there is. I would definitely love if you'd learn a little bit more about realistic images from Drabok, because your stories are also good, but your art style unfortunately is not.
I was talking about story realism, not about style. On that aspect, we are pretty similar.
But that's interesting to hear too, no need to be sorry. I really want to know what exactly you find wrong with my style, but probably we should discuss that on some of my threads not here.
I have to agree with Ganymed; those rape scenes with Jessica and her expressions were awesome, Drabok! Great work! Are arrows possible in Daz Studio? It's a summer camp, and I was thinking you could have four of your "quick death" campers spread-eagled on hay bales. The four guys could have a cometition to see how many non-lethal shots they could perforate the girls with before deadly shots to stomachs, chests or heads. The girls would be able to see the other girls being shot, adding to their horror. Just another thought I had.
And you leave us with even more anticipation for what's coming next! ;-)
A crucifixion waiting for Mia is certainly making me curious, even though it will probably take a while before you get to that, that's one of those things i really want to see. And the character development for Jessica makes sense to me, after seeing what happened to the other girls and especially Jolina she is so shocked she doesn't even care that much about getting whipped any more. So now she can spend the night imagining all the horrors waiting for her in the morning. I guess it will need some harsher torture on the next day to get a better reaction out of her. And it makes me question how good my idea was to have some girls see the mutilated bodies of other girls before their own torture starts, the reactions might be better if they have no idea how serious the situation is at the start.
This time you turned out pretty evil :)
poor girl got into depression.
But I wonder how are you going to torture her in that mental state where she does not respond anymore or where death is better option that life.
One step further and she will start laughing while being killed ;)
I love how broken Jessica is. The trauma of watching a brutal murder left her with no spirit.
I like the idea where she laughs while being killed
Drabok you are definitely a master. Your art is my favorite and Onix is right behind as my next favorite.
Please more chopped off limbs
Drabok, you are the best here, seriously.
I know that you use Daz Studio, but where you got the girls? You create them or got somewhere?
No I do not create characters as such. I get my girls from the usual sources: daz3d.com, renderosity.com and renderotica.com. There are some ready made teen, preteen and child characters. But they do tend to look all the same so I often take an adult character and make it younger with the "Growing Up" morphs by ZevO and some additional morph changes (mostly for breasts). This can result in more individual looking lolis but it only works for maybe one in four adult characters. When it does not work the result tends to look like an alien or a young girl with an adult head attached to it.
I had something else in mind for Jessica, Onix, but the idea of one of the girls getting pushed so far that she just does not care anymore is certainly interesting.
But for now the story continues with a lengthy solo scene for Grace.
The arms on the girls are beautiful…and their limps hands exquisite!!So exciting.
Nice work, Drabok. Oh dear! I'm afraid God may not hear Grace' pleas today. A candle and a straight razor…she might be in for a very bad time!
31505: May be the witch-fire for the religious girl?
Or will it for the winner girl?
This is more than just nice work. It's fucking fantastic!
Grace is unbelievably pretty in those pictures. And as somebody who also does stories with Daz Studio (although they are much tamer than yours) I know how hard it is to have people touch each other and objects all the time, and you almost always do it flawlessly!
You said you like to get criticized so I'll just say this: In the last picture the girls hair does go through the black guys arm. But having tried Dforce with hair myself and having it "explode" on me about 90 percent of the time I really would not know how to do it better.
The background you are describing for Grace perfectly suits my assumption for her character, if that was your plan all along you did a great job with her facial expression in her very first picture.
Candles are nice, lots of things you could do with that. Burning her toes is a good start, and there are many other parts to burn. Dripping hot wax onto her is another option. It's still just warm up, quite literally this time, but that's fine, i hope they take their time with her.
Those beds certainly look like she could end up on one of them. With four bedposts she could get tied spread eagle to a bed. And i noticed the axe on the wall, so far just for decoration, maybe that will change.
It's a good thing that the girl's hair will finally comply to the laws of gravity.
It only shows that even the best can be improved.
Thank you for the explanation!
Let's go back to our Summer Camp ;)
Thank you everybody.>>31523
But don't expect gravity compliant hair in every picture. I works in some, it doesn't in others.
And now for some more of Grace' candlelight dinner.
Is it just for me, but in the latest pictures her expressions and poses look more like an orgasm than pain.
And this time rapists seem to be in the better mood than before as well.
Grace is still looking really lovely, absolutely one of my favorites so far. And i just love it when these girls get burned, maybe the most painful torture method! Candle burns add some variety to the burning iron. Those burned toes are looking great, and that's something that works much better with candles. And we finally got a burned clit!>>31628
Maybe if you ignore her tears and the context it could look like an orgasm. To me, her face in 222 looks mostly like she feels betrayed and can't belief they are doing that to her, in 223 like extreme pain and in 224 like she is preparing for more pain. I like the facial expressions in those pictures.
Also in real life it's very hard to make a distinction between a girl that suffers and a girl that has an orgasm. The facial expression more or less match.
Awesome the candle torture while she is fucked!
Thank you very much, Drabok.
Having been burned by a candle (don't worry, it was my own stupidity) I can assure it was painful and it only lasted for half a second. Grace has to endure whatever her torturers have in mind. I hope she is experiencing lots of pain
I think it would have been extremely amusing, if the dude with the candle had accidentally burned all the hair off the black guy's balls. Highly amusing indeed!
Totally agree with you here. :)
But looks like throe guys have no hair on their balls LOL
once the nipples are nice a crispy they would be easily bitten off. Bit of pork/cunt crackling.
The smell of her burning flesh will stay with Grace for the rest of hr miserable life
As Ganymed said faces of pain and arousal are similar, not only with these 3d-characters but even in real life, so you have to take the context into account to interpret them.
Oh sorry, it was actually Timon who said that.>>31654>>31655
I have not seen a prop for hair on balls so far.
That's all for today.
This thread is again starting to take quite a while to open for posting so I'll probably start a new one soon.
If I were Grace, I think I would be more concerned about the seven knives laid out beside her than the black dude's dick. More pain coming soon?
Another great update! So i guess the focus will be on Grace for a while, and that looks like many knifes and skewers. I like where this is going, that will be a lot of pain for her!
Those nails on the table look quite threatening…!
You're the master. Please keep going
Nice coffee tin, Drabok. Does Onix know you pinched it? ;)
Where the world is going You can't even leave coffee can without getting it stolen by some rapists. LOL
Oh well, at least now I know where it is so I will take it back when I need it :)
I did not pinch the coffee tin. I just lent it. Onix can have it back with only a few skewers missing!
I'm very curious how the table will look in Onix'next series…….
Again, i'd like to pay my respect. You are the master.
Poor Grace… but at least guys seem to be happy :)
When they drop her in the lake, she will be already filled with enough metal to make her sink without extra weight LOL
Pardom for my persistence , but what the hell happened with her chest here? >>31879
You screwed something with posing or it is deliberately made that way?
Another question is how do you manage to do collision with multiple items at the same time? or you used deformers to do those stabs >>31880
We only have one can with skewers, but like 50 types of different tables LOL
I would love her to be stabbed in the tits
Darius should be careful about a possible Grace's kick with those skewers pointing out of her legs.
Thank you Drabok!!!
Well, that's it for Grace, these stab wounds should be lethal. But if they missed her heart it can still take her a while to die, maybe long enough to put some more knifes into her body.
Great pictures overall, but just like Onix i'm not sure about the last picture.
good update, Drabok! But did we miss a couple of pics? I don't believe we saw the first skewers going in, or I missed something. Grace won't last long now. Maybe the guys can get in another knife each before she passes.
No there are no missing pictures. The first skewer goes into her foot in lsc 234. It's in a dark part of the pic I'll admit. After that I only showed every other piercing.
LSC 240 looks much better this way.
That's almost a peaceful ending for Grace. I think you are right with the way she went out, stab wounds in the belly should take a while to kill her, even though they are usually lethal if untreated, at least to my knowledge. I have no idea how painful it would be.
So since you didn't end this update on a cliffhanger of course you are teasing a twist coming up. ;-)
I'm curious what's it going to be. As long as the remaining girls are still getting tortured to death I'm almost sure I'll be fine with anything you come up with.
Onix, I forgot to answer your other question.
No I can't use mesh smoothing for multiple collisions either so I did the indentations for the stabbing as usual with Dformers.
Simple belly wounds take days to kill a person because the death is from bacterial infection from severed bowels. Grace would have died from blood loss which is not painful in itself. Rotting to death from a stomach would takes days and is horribly painful. This is why soldiers during the 30 years war routinely shot their comrades with belly wounds through the head.
Great pics about Grace's end.
I can't wait for the continuation of the story.
And what will be the new twist?
Thank you Drabok!!
Wolves? Bestiality coming up?
At least not soon. Not out of lack on interest but simply because I don't have bothered to get any dogs, wolves or other animals for Daz Studio yet. When I have a choice between a girl and an animal I always choose … well you can guess what.
Great work as always. Drabok!
And you know, there's no good summer camp without a huge BBQ feast.
Just saying …
That sudden hastiness in the girl's treatment is uncouth. What a lack of refinement! The right thing is rather a long careful torture with a lot of pain expressions when the girls are gradually aware of the torment in crescendo.
I know I'm a little late to the party but please consider debreasting Kensey. I love your work Drabok, I know debreasting might be difficult to realize, but Kensey would be the perfect girl for it. She just ticks all the right boxes for me. Combined with pussyshooters wish this could be reaaaaally epic. :)
So now we are getting to the part where our suggestions might have a bigger influence. Looking forward to that! And I'm certainly looking forward to the evening entertainment with Nina and Julieta, both girls are among my favorites!
I'm glad you found Jinn again, even though you are dealing with her very quickly. She wasn't counted on my list any more since I thought you lost her. I had her between number 16 and 17, so still ahead of most girls who already died.
I tried to figure out who exactly is still in the camp, but I ran into some difficulties - some of the girls I could easily recognize, some I'm not sure about.
Shoot one of them in the belly and let her run away and die slowly in the woods!
Maybe add smth in the chest department, like 12 y.o. at least?
Another great update, Drabok. I am very impressed with your skills rendering these pictures. Awesome pained expressions on Jinn! Looking forward to your next update already!
Really an awesome pic, Drabok. Julieta and Nina are two of my favorites, so I'm quite anxious to see more of them. Good job!
If I would torture all three dozen girls in the camp that extensively, when do you think the story would be finished? I guess sometime in 2025. I do have other plans too, you know.>>32112
I would love to be able to do a good debreasting but I still don't know how.>>32124
And maybe you could just look back at some of the earlier pics in the story? Although none of my girls have very big tits many of them have tits and I think their average age is clearly above 12.
I plan to maybe roast some of the girls a bit, and, although I already kind of regret that, I promised to try some cooking. But there won't be any eating of them, because that's another thing I don't know how to do.
32095 - the great picture. The naked girls chained by overhead hand are the best decorations.
32255 - the great too. Girls prepared to do anything now. Anything what gyus ask them to do.
I think we already established a while ago that you would deal with some of these girls very quickly to have more time for the rest, that's completely fine.
I think it's a solid idea to just sell those three girls off, why not make some money with the girls? This ending for them still leaves the possibility of a sequel. But if that doesn't happen, this open ending for them is fine and I won't miss those girls too much: Aurora is my number 25, Caley is my number 30 and Nastyusha is my number 35 - she is just slightly too old for my taste.
So i guess the next four girls will be dealt with relatively quickly too. Rikku is my number 23, Kayla is my number 31, Darnissa is my number 22 and Asako is my number 24, so there aren't any standouts among them either. Though they do look really pretty on their group picture, so i'm still hoping they will get at least some action. And Asako does look different from her introduction pictures, i was expecting to see her but didn't recognize her until you mentioned her name.
Rica was the girl i wasn't expecting to see here, but since you separated her from the rest i guess she will get a special treatment. She is my number 16, so while she isn't among my absolute favorites, i liked her more than the rest of these girls.
I'm looking forward to what's coming next. And i did enjoy these group pictures, even without any rape or torture those are some great pictures to just admire those girls.
Drabok, you know you could show the girls being butchered, then show the guys dining on a plate of generic steaks. Our imaginations will provide the rest.
I find this pic insanely hot for some reason. Their surrender to brutality is very hot!
At this moment it looks as if you just want to end everything faster. Maybe you are itching to start some new series ?;)>>32245>>32248
Actually debreasting is pretty simple task It was kinda what I did in my second series in my 3d "carrier". So it is a bit surprising that you can't do it.
You just duplicate model (twice if you need left and right breast separately) then hide everything but breasts and you have pair of severed tities. drop them on the blood splat and you are done.
same way you can make any severed bodyparts. that can be used for cooking and eating
If you want more precise selection you can use opacity map to hide unnecessary areas.
also if you are too lazy to bother with all that butchering, you can do as >>32274
suggested, and it will work just as good, in fact, you can even stay ambiguous, like just bringing girls some food and give a hint what kind of meat it can be maybe drop in some ring or earing or severed finger . so you will do it without even doing it at all LOL
At last, some suppressed gun around!
POK POK POK! Let their bodies hit the floor!
This looks very sunny. I hope to see some more than serious sun burns there. I also hope for at least one girl being used as a punching bag.
Having a girl butchered but showing it only by innuendo: I'm probably just not subtle enough to it that way. So I'd rather not butcher.
And some more answers to Onix. I guess I haven't expected to be called lazy here. But maybe you are right in a way, maybe I am concentrating too much on continuing my stories, mostly using techniques that I already know instead of learning new tricks. (In my defense though: I am also trying to get better with those techniques.)
If I say that I can't do something, I actually mean I can't do it in a way that I would be satisfied with. I mostly do rather small "Gore" stuff like ripping out fingernails or cutting off toes and nipples or branding because I think it looks better than "big" gore like gutting or cutting off limbs.
Don't misunderstand me. You have posted some amazing images here. The hooks, skewers and the burning candle in your pictures >>28348
are just one example. In many ways you are clearly better at gore techniques than me or most other artists here.
But again: "Actually debreasting is pretty simple task " you say just like that. What? I mean yes, the cut off tits are not that much of a problem with a cutout mask or hiding all other parts of the body. That does not mean they look very convincing and they could only be shown from the front.
But the much bigger problem for me is the girl that has just had her breasts severed. You mentioned "It was kinda what I did in my second series in my 3d "carrier". So it is a bit surprising that you can't do it." I think you mean >>9431
for instance. That, to be honest, does not look good to me. Not that the wound would not look good in a 2D picture. But it in my eyes it clashes hard with a 3D picture. >>14805
looks much better already and I would like to know how you did that. But then >>15714
was a step back again.
Well, that was the very long answer. The short one is: You say "debreasting is pretty simple task" and I say "No it isn't". Not for me.
Your pics are amazing, and I'm sure most of us like what you're doing, Drabok. Just continue with what you're comfortable creating! Thank you!
I hope I will not sound too defensive because you are not attacking me.
That was quite a long time ago. and considering quality I would not say it is that much worse than your pictures that involve blood and other gore so I assumed that it should be adequate quality for you
but you are right I spend way more time in researching new techniques than actually using them :) while you really do better pictures when they do not require something super-advanced.
It is not that simple to decide what to chose, because if you make very realistic debreasrting and other gore it looks pretty ugly and dull as just a surface heavily covered with blood and nothing more. check it here.https://www.nairaland.com/1823960/bad-guys-cut-off-girls
so I was experimenting with that in various ways how to make it look best>>9431
as you noticed is cartoon style debreasting with no realism at all character is also cartoon style as well.>>14805
was actually the most primitive technique where I just added meat texture to the breast area and also added a displacement map to push it in. it looks good because it is very small.>>15714
actually attempt to do a more realistic picture but I screwed it a bit because I forgot to change translucency layer so color went wrong.
You are actually first who told some opinion about those pictures so it is nice to hear it at least a few years later now LOL
If you want to try debreasting. just cut appropriate meat texture from some picture, add it onto the skin layer on both diffuse and translucency. that should look pretty good. just as good as photomanipulation.
you can go further and create normal maps with crazybump but that is a bit more advanced stuff which is probably not worth doing this way.
Well, I can't really help with techniques how to do specific things, but I can give my opinion on how some things look. And I agree with Drabok about gutting and debreasting: Doing that in a way that still looks erotic to me would probably be hard, mostly because I don't have a real life reference and also I doubt I would find the real thing erotic at all - so even if it's done in a very realistic looking way it might not look good. But of course for somebody else with that particular fetish things might be different, I often care more about the reactions the girls are showing to the torture than the torture itself.
For the most part I'm really happy with the way Drabok is doing things with mostly "small" gore, this is perfect to show the pain and fear in those girls. I usually just want to see some good torture, without the limits usually imposed in bdsm settings, including good reactions, and that's exactly what Drabok is usually providing.
But there is some "big" gore I like to see: For example cutting of arms and legs is absolutely one of my fetishes, and I enjoyed the ending of the Harper story where Drabok did just that. With this particular fetish, for me it's more about the hopelessness and helplessness for the girl when her arms and legs are gone. And ideally that means she doesn't die immediately after. Turning a girl into a quadruple amputee and then giving her time to heal before the next torture session starts could be something for another story i would probably enjoy a lot. For similar reasons I would like to see some girls lose their eyes, without immediately getting killed, so they have time to get used to the fact that something really important to them, like their eyesight, is gone forever. That's the kind of permanent torture I like to see occasionally to escalate things in later torture sessions as a step between the initial painful but not permanently disfiguring torture and their deaths, things that couldn't be fixed even if somebody would rescue the girls, while they aren't immediately lethal either.
>>Again Onix, maybe I'm just not a natural like you.: "If you want to try debreasting. just cut appropriate meat texture from some picture, add it onto the skin layer on both diffuse and translucency. that should look pretty good. just as good as photomanipulation. "
Been there, done that and no, it did not look good.
So for me still no debreasting for a while.
Great, nice to see some action pictures for these four girls! And I'm looking forward to more of their test. Well, right now I'm looking forward to pretty much anything coming up that you have teased so far, but what's waiting for those girls looks really promising and it's a nice surprise when I wasn't even expecting to see much more of them!
And as I said, I'm very happy with the less gory stuff you are doing.
Any update and work you contribute is good - big or small, gory or not. Still enjoying and appreciating. Thanks!
Thanks for the update, Drabok. Seems you like to torture us with suspense. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep those pics coming!
I love how the evil man gives his evil speech. I hope those tests are full of pain and despair for those little bitches