Sorry to hear about your deviantart account being terminated.
vico, welcome to Gchan !
re you vico4444
Here's some feedback. Your scenarios are super hot. The girls are too. One area where you could definitely improve though, is blood. It looks pretty bad in most of your pics.
This is VERY good work!>>21071
On the contrary, I was really impressed by the blood in your renders - it looks like an actual fluid in motion, compared with a lot of artists' attempts. Figuring out how to show the wounds it comes out of would make a nice improvement.
While it is nice work but here are few remarks about technology:
making big resolution images with pretty bad rendering quality makes no sense. you better make them smaller than make them noisy. But maybe you already know that yourself and only did that for few pictures
Your blood splatter is pretty good (maybe sometimes a bit too dark), but blood drips on the skin need some more work
considering the content of your work it is hard to say something because it is pretty random so we cannot make comment about the story.
in those situations, I ask authors to put some description of what they are doing. This makes everything buch better.
"you better make them smaller than make them noisy"
I'm doing that now, indeed,
this one for example
"in those situations, I ask authors to put some description of what they are doing. This makes everything buch better."
I'm not very good in english and I will post random images here
my images here
I was curious as to how you did the drooling in these two pics. I like that one is clear and the other is white, like cum.
it's a mesh named "dripz" I don't remeber where I get that
it's just a simple brush on a primitive ( a sphere or a plan ) with a red-dark color
try "blood brush" on google
google : Darkseal's DripZ
Thanks for your quick response. I hope that I can be as good as you someday.
a very important stuff for the blood
Jolab Liquid pack
( example with his picture )
There are stories like these amid pictures and stuff, do all of these end on cliffhangers or...?
Nice to see you took my recommendation on that other site and started posting here, cheers! :)
Do you a link to that redhead's model? I'd like to download it.
Blood still needs work. It looks too monochrome and conversely 2 dimensional. I also think it's too dark.
Besides that though the pictures are pretty great.